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"
The Proposal
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Reviewed By:
PrincessBulma
On:
July 28, 2002 19:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's a good story line, but it needs to be more descriptive. You've got talent for story lines, without a doubt. Work a little and you'll get better.
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