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Reviewed By: devinlydemonic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 13:03 CST
Comment/Review:
what happened this is so good i want more
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Reviewed By: Kary Asakura and Mimi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 15:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pleaser update soon i dont like to have to put up reviews....
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Title: Dream Keeper
Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh no! Poor Naruto! :( His home is gone now and he has no where to go! Hopefully Shika will let him stay with him for a little bit. I like the story. I hope you update again soon!
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Title: Good.
Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 08:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, I like it ^^ Except from some spell/gramm-mistakes, you're doing a good job. I hope that you update soon! I'm sick and tired of all the losers who upload like one chapter and never finish the story. You better not be one of those, cuz I'm adding this fic into my favourites, and you shoul know one thing; I'm not that easy to impress ;) Keep up with the great work (but may I suggest you get a beta?) Ja na. ^^
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