| "How to Get Out of a Ticket" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: GOOD STORY
Reviewed By: ANGELBOY613 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 05:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Good story_the end was perfect. You set yourself up for a string of 1 shots of their experiences 2gether as officers of the law. I could see Naruto goading Sasuke about how he reminded him of Eric Estrada_the dark haired actor who played a California Highway Patrolman on the tv show 'CHIPS'.
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Title: FAWESOME!
Reviewed By: Digi Trish On: February 26, 2008 17:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great just for sheer wow factor of your ending! It's much more original to leave out the sweet mushyness that comes with so many one-shots. Still I find your story so worth pursuing. You HAVE to write another story!
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Reviewed By: Duchesscarml [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 06:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOL! Oh wow, Detective!! God, I would loved to have seen Sasuke-kuns face when Naruto-kun said that! LOL!! I bet this would make an interesting multi-chapter story. ~Duchess~
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Reviewed By: Iroji On: June 04, 2007 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great smut; the ending was perfect. I really wish this wasn't just a one-shot, since you set it up so well. Your writing style was very fluid. I enjoyed the story a lot. Thanks for posting!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: I_Z_Dead_PPL On: May 23, 2007 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this was one of the best stories ever keep it up girl it was awsome!
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Title: nice one
Reviewed By: tovah [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 08:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was good and the end was both Surprising and hella funny at the same time.
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Title: Wonderful work!!
Reviewed By: Devious Lil Devil On: May 04, 2007 04:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol! i, so, wasn't expecting that! too funny! thanks for sharing!
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Reviewed By: Milkmanofkindness On: May 03, 2007 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! I loved the ending, never ever saw it coming and that's usually hard to do cause I have this odd power to guess the ending of anything! But man did I love it!
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Title: Cute!
Reviewed By: C y a n i d e [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 09:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I giggled at the end. xD I liked it alot! Good job. :B
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 18:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was good! I enjoyed reading it.
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