Title: Chapter 1 Reviewed By:Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 12:10 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Very interesting... I would suggest, though, that you turn off the automatic language features in your word processor as the special Japanese 'o' character never imports correctly into MM.org. Just spell out Battousai. ;) I look forward to your next chapter.