| "Lost Soul, Found Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Lost soul, Found heart
Reviewed By: kisa167 On: April 20, 2008 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was fun to read, but I'm an impatient person. So, I had to skip ahead and read who the guy was and then go back. I've seen a few types of stories based on Kaorus' father trying to rape her so it's not THAT original. You have well put words and wonderful grammar not many people can spell like that now a days. Hope to read more from you!
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Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A good start, that it is. I hope that u will come up with more chappies soon. I really want to know what happens next, so if u don't mind, update, that u should. ;) It is awesome!!! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Reignashii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a cool story for a start i look forward to the next chapters! please update soon!!
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