"A Red Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Hiroto [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2010 08:23 CST Comment/Review: Oh my. I truly enjoyed this. I giggled- no, tittered at many scenes, and I love the way the relationship is turning out...although I have some hesitations on it budding so early. Write more. I demand more.
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Reviewed By: SasuXHina4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2008 19:49 CDT Comment/Review: PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! What where the two talking about?!?! Did it concern Amaya?!?! I H A V E to know!!!!
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Reviewed By: stayperfectlystill. On: August 16, 2008 12:16 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I was happy that you updated. Your story is, in my opinion, quite original and very enjoyable to read. But I was wondering, if 'Amaya' had been a kunoichi in her life, wouldn't she have a better time training, instead of struggling with it? Just a thought, but regardless, I hope you update soon. =)
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Reviewed By: Turan On: July 17, 2008 08:17 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Hi! Just to let you know, I don't generally read OC fictions, buuuut yours caught my eye, so thats a very good thing!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 17:18 CDT Comment/Review: lol...thats so funny....I feel bad for her though....I mean who whats to be in the same room with some one you VERY angry with....I know I would so I can yell at them untill I'm satisfided then leave them to sulk...but frankly this is a differenst situation and I feel bad for her ....but gosh its highly entertaining.....I would love to see how this works out............also I feel bad for Naruto too....I mean she just nocked him down like that and it was like he was use to it...in a way he was but still not koo...does she get to know Naruto more too....I hope so he needs a friend................................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 21:03 CDT Comment/Review: So your not going to update the other one....T~T not nice....*pout*....but hay I got to read two chapters on this one so thats koo...I feel bad for her though she doesn't get a break....love to see more updates...............Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 00:08 CDT Comment/Review: I like this story too if only you had updated your other one faster I would have found this one as well.....your not nice.....XP....JK.....but I know what you mean about developing characters, though I'm not an author I love fanfiction, and for some reason even though 12 if only a year younger than 13.......13 seems I don't know more mature...will 12 just feels like a older child....My little brother is 12 maybe thats why....hmph...who knows......but I like this ...I want to know more about this ...in the beginning she is 18 and recalling her life...this I get....but when she said that she loves Itachi and that is was one sided that I don't get....because he seem to like her already....with going out of his way to save her in meny different ways.....any who, update this one too....I just can never get enough....XD......X3...........Meow.......Nyuka
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Reviewed By: _Kamikakushi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 11:13 CDT Comment/Review: eeeeeep please update!! I'm hopping out of my seat, waiting for your story! (:
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Reviewed By: _Kamikakushi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 10:51 CDT Comment/Review: ooooh! i like it!! please write more! i'm bookmarking you (:
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