| "Second Time Around" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2008 06:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... like it so far... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
|
Title: Now blushing.....lol
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok that was realy funny I hope you don't stop this fic its funny even though Kagome got her heart ripped out and thown on the ground and she couldn't just run away from it because of the well all closed off and stuff poor girl.....but wow you realy put her in an interesting position with Bankotsu....I would love to see her give him a little pay back....lol ok now How meny of you fic's have I fallen in love with........all of them....your a good writer........ok you have to update them all now...muhahahahahahahaha...but perferably Deaper destany first *Glinting* : D
|
Title: No way
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No way that is so not true You are a very good writer and don't ever let me hear you dought it I'v read several of you fic's so far and I'm getting all jumpy waiting for the next chapter and stuff I can't ever wait and your tring to pass off that "I'm no good act" no way.....I'm like suffering from with draws just typing this....lol JK but seriously you are a very good author and if nothing else you have guts lots and lots of guts to post your stories so that every one in the world could read them if they so desired......Ok I going to keep read and so don't put your self down... : )
|
Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 10:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
omg!! that was sexy! will there be lemons soon!? who will make the first really move?
|
Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 14:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
well i likes this, its funny as well, really enjoyed the bit when kags is washing jaks hair and kagura come upon them, lol
|
Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm so vastly intrigued that you've brought back my Jackie and Bank that i can't stop reading this, regardless that Kikyo's pregnant with Yash's kid. ::grumble:: I agree with you completely, Bankotsu is probably my favorite villian produced by an anime series, next to the ones from Saiyuki. I can't say that i'm overly happy with the pairings, but that's to be expected. it happens when you put Kikyo and Yash together. meh. i love the thought plan that you're going with this on, but i have to say that you might want to slow down a little. you're plans are great, but you have a LOT of random action. Sesshoumaru showing up and hugging Kagome (im not past chapter 3 yet)threw me off completely, only because it's not in his personality. also, Kagome suddenly having more miko powers then kikyo and being able to jump from teh ground and run through the trees REALLY threw me. you have a wonderful story here, but there are tiny peices of the puzzle missing that i don't want to see create a plot hole for you. i love the band of seven (or should i say Jakotsu and Bankotsu), and it's great that they're now travling with Kagome, just don't rush and make sure that touch on those tiny details. you're doing awesome, keep it up!!!
|
