"Neither One Of Us (Wants To Be The First To Say Good-bye)" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: WeirdBluEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2002 00:44 CDT Comment/Review: I loved the story, it was just A LITTLE scrunched up but, other then that, AWESOME! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 14, 2002 01:32 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I would give this a 50 if I could. Excellent fic to one of my favorite songs of all time. At one point I actually had tears in my eyes and I felt so bad for Y/B. The way you described the breakup made me feel like I was witnessing it and the recap of the 10 years after the fact was comforting. They went on with their lives while still remaining as close friends. You seem to be damn good at this so here's a suggestion: why not do a followup fic using another one of GK/Pips great songs "You're The Best Thing That Ever Happened To Me". It can be a B/V pov kind of thing and a sequel to this one. Anyway, just a suggestion. I'll r/r it for sure. See, this is what a little "publicity" gets you ^_~. Again, Bravo on a job well done! |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2002 11:25 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like this! This is TOTALLY gonna get a place on 'it's all publicity' i'll put you on now! I like the bit with Puar and how she hates the look on Bulmas face, you know, well done! |
Reviewed By: louie On: June 10, 2002 15:10 CDT Comment/Review: Very well writen!!!!!!!!!!!! BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |