| "Watching Them" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: PickLink On: April 13, 2011 00:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you. There's so little Misato/Shinji below 15,000 words, and so little fluff. You have made my day. |
Reviewed By: NERVSGC [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 17:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should keep going with this story, it looks like it will be a good story. Update soon.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Tezza1502 On: May 05, 2007 04:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there. Not a bad little piece of fluff. And while it practically screams out for another chapter, I can't for the life of me see where it could go without re-hashing old familiar territory. So it's probably best it remains as a one-shot. Sorry for rambling on, but it is such a nice short story that I felt a compliment was needed. Good work. T
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