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"The day of mourning" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]

Reviewed By: Torohaha On: June 13, 2007 23:02 CDT
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Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10

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You've got great ideas and a great way to put them together! All that stinks is your grammer. Example 'i' when by itself should always be capitalized. 'i' into 'I' Second of all, and this is a basic, all new sentences need to start with a capital letter. (I'm not making fun of you, this will just make you look more professional.) Example; suddenly Kurama saw the girl in a tree -into- Suddenly, Kurama saw the girl in a tree. Just simple grammer basics to clean up your story. Your style of writing, however, is WONDERFUL!

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