| "Going to Marrakesh" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Bri
Reviewed By: MousyNona On: August 13, 2010 23:35 CDT
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Brilliant, but slightly confusing. But considering the subject it's written about, I find this style of writing compelling, and I absolutely love your unique take on L. I've never seen him depicted this way (and he's been depicted in a lot of ways). Although not the way I see him, this was amazing. Truly nice.
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Reviewed By: thi hoai On: April 06, 2009 09:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The entire fic is a gem, especially chapter nine. You managed to pack cynicism, resignation, beauty, liberation, and tragedy all in one chaotic, stream-of-conscience-like piece... You have a powerful voice *and* my unadulterated love of it.
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Reviewed By: shad0wform On: July 22, 2008 01:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just exceptional. This is by far one of the best stories in a fandom filled with exceptional fiction. Absolutely beautiful descriptions, and such an interesting and utterly compelling take on the events of Death Note. I completely adore the characterization, and the ending is nothing short of perfect. It left me speechless. I found this on your website, but when I finished reading I just had to see if you had posted it anywhere so I could leave some feedback for it, because seriously, you have done such an amazing job with this and I'm so glad I came across this. It's perfect.
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Reviewed By: Alfie xx x On: March 03, 2008 02:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderfull story =]
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Reviewed By: phoenix_of_hell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still love this story. I think it depicts their relationship perfectly, and you make very dark and beautiful descriptions.
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Reviewed By: phoenix_of_hell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 07:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another very cool chapter. I wonder about the ending of this...
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Reviewed By: phoenix_of_hell [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 11:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, this story is very dramatic, and dark. This is probably how a relationship between them would be. I also like the descriptions, and all that. Waiting for an update.
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Reviewed By: LovableTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2007 01:04 CDT
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Very very nicely written. Smooth flow, interesting, deep characterization, and I just loved the chemistry between L and Light. :)
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Title: chp 13
Reviewed By: Helios82 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
absolutely beautiful. stealing a few lines for an away message, if you dont mind :) ~yasashii kawa
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Reviewed By: quaedam [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 10:39 CDT
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I am in love with this fic already. This last chapter was just brilliant--it reads in the way that I feel them to be, and that is wonderful, because so very little fic written for them does read like *them* to me. Wonderful.
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Reviewed By: Helios82 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can i leave a cheesy but entirely true comment? you have a way with words that floors me. can words be elegant? bc thats how i feel like this should be described. i love the take you have on Light's character, you make him real, if that makes sense :) this is beautifully written and i look forward to more.
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