Reviewed By: animangamaniac On: June 05, 2007 17:26 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review: I like how you're going with this. very good
Reviewed By:MarsStarlight [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 16:51 CDT Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: You are off to a good start. You managed to draw my attention into the story. I do hope you continue posting. I would love to see how you develop the plot line and the characters more.