| "Playground Love" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 07:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nearly had me crying when Kagome's dad died T_T
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Reviewed By: bmine4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 05:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is sooo cute!!!! ^^ please update!!!
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Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 21:58 CST
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yay!!! finally, another chapter!! haha, i feel victorious... and i like the changes you made to chapter 1 update soon please!! your newest fan =D
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Reviewed By: hopelessromantic_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
leave it to miroku some things never change please update soon
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Title: AND THE STORY CONTINUES
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 23:16 CDT
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Its been about two months but I see that you have finaly posted a new chapter thats koo....even though I kinda had to go back a skim over the other chapters so I still had the story in mind.....I so happy that Inuyasha was there for her in her time of need that is such a great thing for him to do.....I'm glad that things were starting to get normal for them.......I'm sure that you will update faster now....right??.....I realy do think this is going to be a realy sweat story....I just can't wait for your update....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 22:00 CDT
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That was so sad....the thing that bothered me so much was that his death was draged out....I mean I knew he was going to die because of the title but he could have had a pain less death but noooooooo ya had to get him in a pain full car crash and then have him fight for his life getting the families hopes up just to drop them like a tun of bricks.......that stinks alot...*cry* *scream* *sob*......other then the horrible passing of the Kagome's father (Does her father have a name?? I wander) but this is a very good story, I just Know its going to turn out ok....the only thing you got to do is update and make sure that you don't let it die because I hate when that happens...I get all in to a fic and they they stop updateing it...Please don't do that....Update as soon as posible, please and thankyou..............................Nyuka
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am enjoying story. Very sad chapter. You are a very talented writer. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: -x-kagome-x- [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 21:13 CDT
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*crys* wahhh thats so sad *blows nose* good chapter tho and good story keep up the great work update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 17:58 CDT
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A strong chapter. Rang true as it brought to mind several deaths in my family.
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 19:57 CDT
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I love this story, it's sad, but very good. Please update soon!= )^-^
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
a really good story, so cute!!!!!!! more!
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Title: inu 4ever
Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah i like this fic. poor kagome (for her father) it is good to know that they already are friends though. just keep on updating
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Reviewed By: Witchlit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 02:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this sounds liek its going 2 be a great story....cant wait 2 read more...update soon ^_^
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