| "The elemental hearts..." Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: sakurablossom On: September 04, 2002 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeealylike this fic you muuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuust write more!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: sakurablossom On: August 25, 2002 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story lots please please please please please write more!!!!!!!!!^_^ |
Reviewed By: Alley Cat On: July 03, 2002 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the the green print. It explained the other character's form of comunication really well. The spelling could use a little work. It got sort of sloppy but it was good over all. I thought it was really creative, exept for one the names of the lights. I really enjoyed the fanfiction' and hope I will be continued. |
Reviewed By: Xtreme Nuisance On: July 01, 2002 15:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
haha. I like. MORE PLZ! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Fireheart [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2002 15:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very interesting [strokes chin]. But I seriously doubt that it's be PG. Maybe PG-13? I haven't seen a PG movie or fic that had a murder in it! But please continue! I'm a bit confused on Li's aura! |
Reviewed By: Alanna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2002 15:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey this isn't bad at all. [It looks more like PG-13 w/ the blood] but very good! Good job! Write more. I'd really like to c how come Syaoran has no aura!! |
