| "Marriage" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 05:57 CDT
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so GOOD!!! okay, i think the couple may be progressing a little too fast, but still it's so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i totally love this story and your long chapters, MORE plz!!
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your story. You can write really well. I enjoyed this last chapter. I hope Kagome tells Inuyasha about the pregnancy in the next chapter. Now that they confessed their feelings, the next lemon should be good. I hope Inuyasha doesn't think Kagome said she loves him because of the pregnancy. Keep up the excellent work. Sitting on the edge my seat, waiting for the next chapter! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 17:48 CDT
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Alright, no clear resolution yet to how Kagome's going to spill her little secret. Question,when Kagome left the doctor's office she was thinking what to do about Inuyasha and her situation. Was the talk she had with Inuyasha all just a set-up to hide her pregnancy longer or does she really love him? How come Inuyasha can't sniff out that she's pregnant or does he know already and is waiting for her to tell him. Mhmmm, just so much to take, can't wait for the next chapter, read ya later.
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Reviewed By: inufanfan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 14:21 CDT
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good story really well written. update soon please
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Reviewed By: xAznPurity [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love This Story, Please Update Soon!
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Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 06:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanx for updating. i like this fic and it is such a wonderfull idea. love u. keep on updating
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 03:20 CDT
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Okay, time for Kagome and Inuyasha to move a little faster. I know they're being responsible and all being as that they don't know each other too well. They need to start opening up verbal wise so they can get into each other's minds. Poor Kikyo always written as the whore,homewrecker- I love it. Update Soon
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!!!! I'm totally hooked your story!!! Inuyasha's dad is a real jerk. I hope everything goes good for them. Well have a wonderful day. Please update soon.
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Title: inu 4ever
Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yup i like this chapter too. they get alng very good. nice to know that u write fast so just keep on writing and i will go on and review. will u also look at: A Hanyou Pirate, A Noble Hanyou? plz. i've started to write myself it is my first fic ever so plz tell me how u think it is. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Ayame87 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good start to what should be an excellent fanfic. I can't wait to see how Kagome and Inuyasha resolve this crisis of theirs.
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Title: Good job!
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 19:52 CDT
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I really like this story, it's different from other fics out there and that's what makes it good. Please continue.
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Title: inu 4ever
Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes this is a fic with feelings i know it.well i hope they will be great friends a have some feelings for eacohter as their live goes on. but this sis a very good fic already so just u go on =)
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very sweet begining...they are in deep crap if they dont consumate the wedding..isnt there some hidden rule that it must be consumated? I heard that somewhere, not sure where...hmmm..anywayz. Great begining to what I think will be a good story. Thank you!
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