Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 16:27 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Its a good start however a little rushed, you need to bring in more depth to your characters and surroundings, try pacing the story a little more it really sounds interesting, Veggie make a good vamp - keep up to good work
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