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Reviewed By: Fel1138 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2009 08:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of your best works. This is an uncommon pairing, but you really made it work. My only complaint is that Asuka seems a tad one-dimensional, but given that bitch!Asuka is a necessary part of the plot, this is understandable. On a side note, the thing with the hotel room did drive me nuts with speculation, but I can assume it involves alcohol, incriminating photos/videos, and a whole lotta nudity.
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Title: Aaw
Reviewed By: Jehuty Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. one of the few fanfics that made me feel all warm inside. I look foward to reading more of your work.
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Reviewed By: demonevangelion On: August 10, 2007 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hay man, tis was an awsome read. one guestion thou, any chance of you writing a second chapter on what happened to Asuka, pleeeeease?
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Brax The Great [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AZ Mark-II, Amigo, you have written a wicked and thoroughly enjoyable read, subtle and vivid all at once...brilliant!! Do you have a sequel to it...you seemed to end it off without completely explaining what hikari did to keep Asuka out of Shinji's hair for the night
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Reviewed By: Un-Registered Dude On: May 24, 2007 04:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was damn good. Hikari is an under-used pairing.
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Reviewed By: someoneelse On: May 15, 2007 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope you write a sequel or some sort of follow up. the story was very enjoyable. not to mention it would be nice if hikari actually gets to keep shinji
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Reviewed By: Grey Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 07:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you either continue this or make a longer sequel the whole concept is unique its not only Shinji/Hikari but a Shinji/Hikari/Kodama. This is a wonderful fic.
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Reviewed By: JErosion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 09:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kije Passage I enjoyed this fic a lot. Most fanfiction make Hikari as an innocent school girl, so I was really surprized to see such a dominant and almost aggressive Hikari.
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Title: Pfc.
Reviewed By: Luke McDonald On: May 08, 2007 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
to start with, i found that crachters were portrayed with their bound for the most part as we never met her sister in the series but i supose she could be like that. as for the mature Hikari (are name always typed with a capital letter?) i surpose that she would be a bit more worldly if she had her 'cherry' popped and was inspired to 'help' Shinji, but does that always happem on the first date? i think not. i think an extended story could come from this and i would encourage you to investigate it, myslef i prefer this paring more than others well good story and not as heavy on the lemon as some others
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Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow a mature Hikari expierienced and very clear in her goals. not the girly giggling class rep from the series. I just love these one shots and I really hope we see an Eva-Adult saga from ypou soon as you have done before! dennisud
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