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| "Mixer Party" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: ibskib [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2015 19:20 PDT
Comment/Review:
Entertaining, although a shame Misato didn't decide to go with
Shinji instead, there was some teasing earlier that went
unfulfilled, not to mention that I prefer shipping her with Shinji.
| Title: Bravo
Reviewed By: R. C. Mongler On: August 06, 2008 01:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Extremely good, Extremely well-written, and Extremely enjoyable. 10/10 if everyone gets pregnant.
| Reviewed By: A Reviewer On: January 07, 2008 02:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, I recall the first time I read this. I can't recall though if I read and then voted, or if I had to go back and find it. Regardless, it remains one of my very favorite NGE lemon stories. I'm fairly impressed how you used damn near the entire NGE cast, and I think you actually did feature everyone that had a name at some point in the fic. Touji and Kensuke don't get a lot of play in lemons (which I can't be arsed to care about) so seeing them is slightly unusual and remarkably cool, especially considering they lost it to a remarkably deranged and angry Ritsuko. Unusual but win. The Kaji/Misato/Hyuga threesome was kinda 'eh' because I don't happen to like either of the guys very much. Kaji's okay as a character because he actually got a really decent role in canon, but I often think of him as the kind of guy I'd shoot if he came near any daughter I was to have. And that says something, because I'm firmly of the opinion that people should generally be left to their own mistakes. Hyuga... well, he's a bit of a weeny and follows Misato entirely too much like a puppy. I vaguely admire his dedication to her, but he's a lame ass geek overall. *shrugs* I'm a geek for the most part, but I'm not a complete lame ass. XD Maya gets a lot more play than you'd expect from a relatively minor character, but she's still a bit on the under-used side, so it's always nice to see her in a story, and after reading the 'Chances' series way back when, I can't easily envision her with anyone but Shinji (unless it's with Shinji and Ritsuko in a kinky slightly demented threesome =D). Hikari is also a relatively underused favorite of mine, and based off of her personality, you know she's probably pretty damn kinky. It's the whole 'teenage authority figure' thing. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with those four next. Speaking of, I'm really curious to see "The Morning After", which I'm assuming will happen eventually since you didn't mark the story as a oneshot. Will Hyuga get his wish? Will Kaji become vengeful? How far will Ritsuko make stooge's two and three suffer? Will Asuka still be a good girl in the morning? Will Hikari or Maya die of embarrassment in the morning? Will Shinji become a legend? Was all that was needed was for the Eva pilots to get laid? I'm anxious to find out, someday. It won, really, really hard. Later
| Reviewed By: Priest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 07:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
I would defanately like to see a continuation of this story. keep up the good work
| Title: LMFAO
Reviewed By: Kanto The Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 13:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, first of all. That was HILARIOUS. I mean I almost hurt my sides, I laughed so hard. The party turned from something simple into random chaos, and if that's the effect you were going for, you pulled it off nicely. Spelling and grammar need no review- both were excellent. Can't wait to see what happens to Shinji next. More chapters, NOW. This story recieves the K.T.S. Seal of Awesomeness, for being graded 10 on all levels.
| Reviewed By: NERVSGC [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 20:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please keep going with this story, it is a very good story and I would like to read more chapters for this story. So Please add more chapters to this story.
| Reviewed By: Nacnud On: May 09, 2007 13:22 PDT
Comment/Review:
I really liked the Shinji parts of story. While I would like reading more of the story I really want to see what you have happen next with Sinji and his group. Hope you plan to add to the story and keep up the good work. Sorry this story didn't do so well in the contest, as I thought you did a good job.
| Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 17:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well very hot and bothered and this Kaji sure deserves every bend in the road he gets. Akagi going Gendo was funny as hell and IMHO Misato and Huguya are a great pairing here. But Shinji... oh boy Sure he isn't a Saotome??? ;-) I feel a though the morning after this party there will be a lot of reprecussions. Maybe this is the start of that Eva Adult saga I asked you for! Regardless of a contest! dennisud
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