| "Passage" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: anno On: November 02, 2007 00:29 CDT
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I liked the second one, and i really would like to see one where kensuke would got some fun witch asuka
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Reviewed By: awuyzaki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 02:32 CDT
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i thought there was a cont. it's jist another version... well i like the 1st one..
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Reviewed By: Priest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 00:37 CDT
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this is an interesting story, i liked the first version better, well except the very end dealing with the next day bit that was a better ending. though i would like to see a continuation ov both versions. untell next time keep up the good work.
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Title: Hmmmmm, Interesting
Reviewed By: dennisud2015 On: May 28, 2007 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read the original and this one being an alternate was in its own way as good. But I see why you didn't use the handjobs that Aida got here. Honestly in both stories you didn't need to onvolve him at all. Don't get me wrong I'm ok with Kensuke as long as he doesn't get involved with ANY of the girls. Hikari would be IMHO the only one who might havd a slight chance with here. Honestly if he wasn't in this we wouldn't have missed much other then I have actually seen a dick like that on one of those ametur Porn vids at a party recently. That was well weird I was even surprised that the guy actually got it into that girl in the vid. Having Asuka do that with him brought all that back (Ugh!). Overall a great job and finally a bit more at the end. That joke about Aid's tool would be the only thing keeping those scenes in worth while. dennisud
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Title: uhm
Reviewed By: awuyzaki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 00:43 CDT
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ditto...
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Reviewed By: Kanto The Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thou art impressive. Quite a skilled writer. This is the second excellent piece of work I've run across from you... you have elevated to Favorite Author status. This is the second K.T.S. Seal of Awesomeness you have recieved thus far... now all we need is another few chapters of this.
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Reviewed By: glugglug On: May 14, 2007 00:44 CDT
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What happened to v1? Can you put that up as well
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Title: =D
Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 10:30 CDT
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Wow. Long ._. I've only read one other good Evangelion fic, and I loved the show so much so it's a bummer that there aren't many good fanfics about it like this one. Great work. Hot, smutty and quite original =)
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Reviewed By: JErosion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 09:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic had my vote in the contest, it was a shame it didn't go as well as I would have liked. Of coarse I've always been fond of fics where Shinji and Hikari get it on.
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Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
As alwasy a very satisfying story. And of this contest does it exclude Rei in this scenario? as I saw maybe 2 to 3 words on Rei in all three stories. Still great as Hikair IMHO was the most normal of the children. Though I hope you give Rei some chance in a later story! dennisud
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