| "To be, or not to be... In love." Reviews/Comments [ 116 ] |
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 04:39 EDT
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That was a good chapter and a great way to end it. I understand about the converse. They can go with anything. I had a friend who wore there converse to their prom and at their graduation. What makes it strange? She was a girl. But hey, she loves them and they are pretty cool.
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Reviewed By: rayangel911 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 01:06 EDT
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was soooooooooooooooooooo goood well just wanted to say that was one of the best stories i've ever read!! so KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Great work!!^^
Reviewed By: Yuna-chan On: June 11, 2007 13:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is really good...write somemore and update soon...and um yeah..long live NARUSASU!!!Keep SasUKE as the uke lol... and who is Sasuke girlfriend[that mentioned earlier] anyway???
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Title: Mr. Uzumaki
Reviewed By: Narutoking On: June 09, 2007 12:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I keep finding myself falling in love again with this fic each time i read it, i love it with sasuke as the uke, it is a refreshing change with all the fics with him as an overbearing seme. The pairing of shikamaru/neji is a good idea as well
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Antipathy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 04:25 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay so I finally got an account on here and this fic is my first review(with an account) YAY us! but Its like 4am so this might be useless. ANYWAYS! I went Awe quite a few times in this chapter. It was cute. I like how you do Naruto's POV some people cant do it very well but I think you nail it! I saw in your AN in the beinging you were thinking of putting Gaara with Shino. Please no(I mean if you want to go ahead but Shino is strange and I think he is asexual with bugs *shivers* and Im like Gaara's biggest fangirl in the world... soo yeahhh) I think Gaara is adorable with Lee(A lot of people dont like that and I tell them to read Diplomatic Relations by Maldoror. It will convert most anyone to Gaa/Lee) So yeah thats my random sugesstion. Moving on. If you put in any yuri who would it be?*ponders* Im interested in whats happening with the play. I love your Shika/Neji thing its cute Neji is Seme isnt he?(if his is I like how he is Seme in life and uke in the play). Sasuke is acting like a girl but I can see why because they are still trying to figure it all out. I Hope to read more soon. Thanks. Bye.
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Title: after reading ch 3
Reviewed By: depressedchildren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 17:51 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally can see this naruto as seme now, at least with this sasuke. it's really good and i can't wait till you update, well actually i can but you know what i meant. anways good job and keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: depressedchildren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 14:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have enjoyed this fanfiction very much, and I'm not sure if it's your personal oppinion on Karin but I agree with sasuke and naruto, 'casue she does dress a litle... she's not hot or cool. Um... as for naruto as seme I can understand why you put him as it and why you're sick of susnaru, but I was surprised. To me it seems like naruto is still trying to figure his feelings out so i dunno it's your story make it however you want, i was just surprised from how it had been written, though i can see why you made him seme... Great job, love it!
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Reviewed By: Magda On: June 06, 2007 19:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I'm not generally a fan of AU, but this story's so fun. I don't have a problem with Sasuke's personality having some different facets, because the only personality we really know about is his being a silent, rage-filled freak scene. If you want to flesh that out a bit, more power to you! I have my fingers crossed that we'll eventually see Gaaaaaraaaaa (yum....)
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 17:55 EDT
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That cool. I really like this chapter and understand why it was the way it was. They needed thime to figure things out and people tend to act a little differently when they are trying to work things out I guess. Still I really enjoyed the chapter and can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Kera On: June 06, 2007 16:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story it's so well written and i've never read a story where naruto and sasuke get together because of a play. I'm really looking forward to reading more of this story!
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Reviewed By: Jessica_Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 13:58 EDT
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Love your story! Though I do find it funny how good Sasuke is at being uke....Guess i just never thought about it. Oh well! Please update soon! ^-^
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 13:25 EDT
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good chapter. yay! sasuke & naruto are starting a relationship!!! anyways, i feel really blonde for just realizing that shikamaru and neji are a couple. lol. i love that pairing, but ive only found a couple fics w/ it. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: ~Aynjal~ On: June 06, 2007 11:03 EDT
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Love the story......think you should make sasu uke then naru uke.....mix it up a bit......+ Me thinks garra/itachi is good pairing.....(just saying) write more fast!!!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 08:28 EDT
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The Chapter was HOT.......I loved it ....yay Naruto and Sasuke are going out... can;t wait....update again soon. please
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Reviewed By: Kenmaru Itoshii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 16:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing style; how the characters explain themselves, it adds to the story, but when they get off track and 'they' correct themselves...it seems a little odd to me...and as a personal opinion….Also I think Sasuke should stay the uke.....how you've set him up as a stoic block to the world, but Naruto turns him into a crying mess....(it be cool if you could make it so Naru turns out to be the uke in the real relationship, because the Play would give them the chance to take/relinquish control to the other...) (Finally I'd like to propose the thoughts of having Gaara appear….he could easily be a foreign exchange student… maybe he longs for Naru or Sasu?.....just an idea….(I like Gaara….just don't let him actually win one of their hearts…) thanks for your time, Kyon (NONE of this is meant to offend you....)
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