| "To be, or not to be... In love." Reviews/Comments [ 116 ] |
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Title: To review
Reviewed By: LinaelAeonsky [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2011 05:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's wellll. . . . how do i put it? I can guess what will happen next. But that doesn't mean it's not enjoyable. you did a good job on this fic and i thank you for the time you took top write it. Even if it's for your own sake. Keep up the good work and do not stop learning. We always have room for improvement. |
Reviewed By: Fluffymiyster [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 19:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well...wasn't I off on my assumption of Itachi! I don't know why I thought he was killed..and the parents being the ones to ititiate his issues wasn't expected (at least not from me). Ramblings aside, I like where this story is going (eh, nothing wrong with a little angst!). Quite frankly, considering they're all teenagers, if everyone of them just knew they were madly in love with the person they were with, I'd have to roll my eyes...basically, I like the issues Shikamaru and Neji are having here in chapter six. It's a little more true to real life...but, if they end up back together, then that's just fine too. Its a couple I never would have thought of, but its a good one at that! And Gaara and Itachi...damnit, they were supposed to be MINE! ^_^ Okay, let me end the rambling...really liking the story, can't wait to get on to the next chapter!
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Title: I am now reading a masterpiece of work...
Reviewed By: Fluffymiyster [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 22:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, on a weird whim (or not so weird...I am a NaruSasu/SasuNaru fangirl after all...) I looked up a story like this...and all I have to say is wow. I first thought about not reviewing since it's been a year since this story was posted, but, eh, what the hell. I'd like it if someone did the same for me! Anyways, for me personally so far, the second and third chapters have been extremely powerful. Sasuke crying...what a twist! And then blowing chunks in front of Naruto...epic. lol! But really...the way he hints about what happend to Itachi sounds like what the younger main character happened to him in Broke Back Mountain (never seen all of it and never uncensored...damn cable tv, lol!). So basically, I'm guessing that Itachi died from some homophobic idiots...but let me keep reading to find out! I just wanted to congradulate you on your writing...very good indeed!
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Reviewed By: Cloudface On: August 02, 2008 05:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That maid part was the funniest thing in this story yet. I actually LOL'd...and I don't do that often with funny stories. This story is so sweet. ~cloudy!~
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Title: LAWL
Reviewed By: cloudface On: August 01, 2008 06:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story could have been sooooo terrible, but you, armed with your perfect spelling and grammar, have made it fantastic. I see many stories LIKE this written by awful, horrible, terrible, why-on-earth-do-you-even-bother writers. This one is written by a great writer; thus, it is amazing...so far. ~cloudy!~
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Title: LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: mystic_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 20:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*,*...i think i have found my favorite story!!! this was really awesome...i mean AWESOME!!!^,^ love it very much...your writing style is simply wonderful and i think this story will be read many times with enjoyment!! haha your awesome!!!
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Reviewed By: nolongerfunctioning [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 09:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think this was very well written, but Ann and Sarah seem...a bit Ooc. I think they should have been switched, as its usually Hinata (Ann) who is the shyer one. But, if Hinata was suppose to seem out of character because she wasn't Hinata, that's fine too ^^ It's easier to remember who's playing who, though, if they are somewhat the same to their real life counterpart :D Well done, though :D
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Reviewed By: ya-ya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 13:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay its over i loved ur story keep it up
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: Endless91 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 14:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*stands up and applauds with the audience* That was a really great story. I wonder what it would be like manga style. *eyes sparkle with hope for the future* I look forward to reading more of your stories. This is one of the first FanFics that caused me to squeel from beginning to end. GOOD JOB
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Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2007 05:41 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god that was awe inspiring. i loved it. i really liked how the play and your story had so many parallels. it was a really good story.
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 08:34 EST
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this was WONDERFUL.. I am absolutely happy at the way that your story turned out it was so entertaininge and sweet it was AWSOME!!! I LOVED IT!!! hope u had a Merry Christmas!
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Title: FInally!
Reviewed By: chii-yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 00:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was the best oh god it was hot and so sweety so dramitc so...so wonderfuly perfect ~Applauses with joy and has silint tears coming down face~
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Reviewed By: XD On: December 25, 2007 16:25 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAHHH THT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!! *SQUEAL i luv ur story and creative plot line.the humors great too XD i hope ur next story is one w/ the underground gang plot- tht be reallllyy swweeetttt merry christmas ^^
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Reviewed By: Kit48 On: December 24, 2007 23:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo! Outstanding job - I'm heart the mushy ending....I LOVE HAPPY ENDINGS!!! Wonderful Job^^
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Reviewed By: kitsunegirl48 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2007 18:38 EST
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PS: Heh - me again, I wanted to know, is this a real play or did you write it to go witht your fic - if you did write it you should submit to a theatre or some (or at the very least flesh it out and make it a book) - it's that good (Yay I was 1st to review this chapter!)
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