| "Blind Obsession" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Title: Beautifully Written!
Reviewed By: ccam3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2015 08:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was on the edge of my seat the whole time I read this! Dramatic
without being sappy. The characters were VERY in character the
whole time. Character and relationship DEVELOPMENT! People making
mistakes and resolving them. Thank you for writing this and sharing
it with us! This has inspired me to take more care in my future
stories,as well.
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Reviewed By: anf600 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 20:06 PDT
Comment/Review:
Awesome fic! I will have to look you up on LiveJournal. Great work.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Tiger_gurl88 On: September 16, 2009 03:22 PDT
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Yeah I just read the whole thing. Very nice your style of writing is amazing and I left me wanting more. You are pretty good and I can't wait to read more from you. Your in a class of your own.
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Title: So Happy....
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: January 10, 2009 16:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was sad when this story ended, then I found your other work, "Training Edward Elric" and I coulden't be happier! I've been so busy lately, I guess I forgot to see if you had other works when I stumbled across that one! Of course by the time I was done reading it I had to go, so I wrote a semi-quick review without knowing that you were the author :p I enjoy both works emensly, as you portray Ed and Roy very well and make this pairing believable. I hope to see more of your work in the future so do please keep writing! Until then~
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Reviewed By: abadgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2009 21:49 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great story--sorry to see it go, but I understand about dragging it out unnecessarily. I will be reading your other writings now that this one is finished, and I'll be looking for any oneshots related to this one!
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Reviewed By: Black Wolf Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2008 21:45 PST
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I Luv this fanfic, and i will be on the look out for more of your work
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Title: Darn
Reviewed By: Iz On: December 30, 2008 19:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great fic! I hope your going to finish C-5 too. I hope you haven't ended the story, we at least have to find out what the speacil order was.
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Reviewed By: cloverfire19 (not signed in) On: December 30, 2008 18:22 PST
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Awwww......sad day. I loved this story a ton! I look forward to reading the other ones you've written!
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Title: FUCK YEAH
Reviewed By: HAERTOFAVAMPYRE [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 20:13 PST
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Fuck, i never new ed could be such a slut a still be THAT fucking hot while doing it. Thank you for providing that shitload of entertainment for my yaoi addicted self. heh, i just sounded like a guy up there.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 13:14 PST
Comment/Review:
Damn, it felt like you uploaded this weeks ago instead of days, and it's still hot as shit, lol. Continue to update, will ya? Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Renna On: November 01, 2008 07:21 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*fan girl squeal* :D Finally Ed has something good going on. Poor guy he was getting so depressed and lost. At least he has Al back now. And I'm so curious to see how you're going to get Roy and Ed together. This actually made my day seeing this updated. :) *waits for next chapter*
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2008 23:47 PDT
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Heh, little less angst, more reconciliation, at the cost of a shit-ton of it next chapter. Seriously, how the hell is Mustang gonna get around Al now knowing about the whole thing? Might not know who it was with, but he is smart, he'd figure it out, and might be able to tell Ed WHY he never told him who he was. That part could suck. Neh. Continue to update, though. Ja ne.
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Title: Awww....
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: October 28, 2008 20:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, somethings going right for poor Ed. I was actually waiting for more misery to show up at his door step. ^^' After all thats happend its nice to see a positive twist. Roys' going to have to do some MAJOR ass kissing to get back in Ed's good graces, if he can at all. I still have no clue how your going to pull those two back together, but I think you've got a good start at Al and Ed making up. Cant wait for the next chapter, please continue! XD
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Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2008 16:41 PDT
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Awwwwwwwww............I hate that Ed and Mustang are mad at each other! But I like the little twist. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 21:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWW T_T poor Ed!!!!!! *huggles him* this story is really good though! im really proud of you! ^^
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 17:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just had to tell you how HOT your story is! I am just so mad that I found it so late, but it is fire!!!!! I love the way you have Ed submitting to Roy right off the bat in the first chapter! I love it when Roy dominates Ed like that! It just sets my little heart to racing! I can hardly wait for chapter 12, I hope you post it soon~ B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Renna On: October 16, 2008 08:34 PDT
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*lets out a little fan girl squeal* It always makes my day to see such a great story like this updated instead of having the author forget about it. This was amazing. Poor Ed in finally figuring out it was Roy but I saw it coming once Ed was brought to the hospital. I mean it's Roy, Roy always visits Ed. But now, no idea what's going to happen next...it's what I love about this story. The first few chapters in, you never could dream it would turn out something like this. You also have a very good writing style, description wise with fine details and making sure everything makes sense. *patiently awaits next update*
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Title: Everything that can go wrong, will
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: October 13, 2008 06:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have no idea how your going to bring these two together after THIS chapter, but I wish you all the luck in the world ^^' God I feel bad for Ed, its like all his misery has piled up, just to be released at the same time. It was only a matter of time befor he broke down. Lovely, as always. I love how this is written and can't wait for more! So until then, ja ne!
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Title: noooooo
Reviewed By: kitsunesan (nsi) On: October 13, 2008 05:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was SOOOO not how i wanted that to turn out!!!! please update again soon. i love this story and every detail. i want more!!!!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2008 16:02 PDT
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It was bound to happen, but it still sucks in every single way, neither of em deserved to find out like this, well, Ed didn;t deserve to find out about his mysterious friend at his weakest moment. Damn, it;s gonna be near impossible to get Ed to trust Mustang again after this, and probably not even then. For that matter, what happens when he realizes the consequences for a relationship between subordinate and superior, or at least remembers it? That is gonna suck. Neh. COntinue to update, this story rocks. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: gunslinger-alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2008 08:13 PDT
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pleaaaasssseee update soooon! this is really cool!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: trumpeter4anime [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2008 19:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh wowo great turn of events with the whole blind thing very creative story's been so awsome so far
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Reviewed By: Renna On: September 09, 2008 18:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fianlly been waiting forever for this. Poor Ed. I forsee him figuring out it was Roy all along. And there is a saying that it gets worse before it gets better. I think that applies here. ...and I let out a fan-girl squeal when I saw it was updated...LOL
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Title: Soooo Sad! :(
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: September 09, 2008 09:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Ed, his life just gets worse and worse, I actually feel his pain :( Wonderful chapter, I was so excited to see that you updated I let out a rather embarassing fan-girl squal :P Wonderful work as always, I think I know where your going with this and it's a wonderful direction! ;p Heres waiting for the next chapter! XD
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Reviewed By: harderfasterplease [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 15:51 PDT
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My god, that was a very good chapter! XD But I hope that our little Edward is okay :[ That would suck if he was permanently blind. . . DX
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 21:52 PDT
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Jeeze, all this stuff does add up eventually, ya know. It sucks, but that's life. Continue to update, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: August 16, 2008 12:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story, fun, fun! Very well written, I enjoyed it greatly. Who knew Roy was a super perv lol A very enjoyable read, cant wait for the next chapter, perfect 10s from me, keep it up! ;p
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Reviewed By: zyf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 18:59 PDT
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This story must be very challenging, but you've done amazing. Figuring out all the parts that seem crazy and making them actually seem plausible. You are a great writer. I'm looking forward to how it'll all end. Everyone deserves love...except Russle for being an asshole!
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Title: =O! WOO
Reviewed By: TypoDemon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2008 21:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeeeeees! Do want more chapterrrrs :D:D:D I've gotta re-read the story until more comes out! But hey that's all good! hope all's going well for you! ~Typo
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Reviewed By: Sydney On: July 13, 2008 20:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have REALLY enjoyed this story so far. I sincerely hope that you continue it. I must say that I saw something happening between Ed and Russell, but I didn't quite expect it to be like that, so it was a good thing to be thrown at me. It's really good and I like the mental attributes that you've put into it. Please update soon!
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