| "The Crowbar" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Amaazing
Reviewed By: ChoLei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2008 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it so far!! :D Please keep updating and working hard! I like the way you write. You're very talented.
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Reviewed By: muzikyin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 07:12 CDT
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yay an update ^^ hooray cant wait for the next chapter [altho the mike being gay part was kinda expected.... and i dont think they really discharge you for that do they??] *thinks*
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Reviewed By: Dark_Angle666 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2008 13:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am so glad you updated! I enjoy all of your stories, and this one seems a little different. Very intresting, of coarse, and I hope for more soon. Good luck with all your other stories (your an incredible multi tasker!) and never stop writting!!!
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Reviewed By: muzikyin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 06:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lolz great story, really hilarious ^^ hope u update soon ^^ keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Dark_Angle666 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 16:17 CDT
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Once angain, I am impressed by your writtnig. I've said it before, your stories are so real. The characters could be my next door neighboor and the conflicts they face are real life dramas that people (maybe not everyone, lol) actually go through. I really like crowbar for the way you've set it up. I'm a sucker for family dramas like Jayce's situation. I also really like mysterious/crazy characters that you can't get enough of, like Chaz. I really want to know more about him, but at the same time don't want to spoil the mysterie, because tha's half his apeal. I sincerly hope everything works out for everyone, cuz I'm also a sucker for happy endings. Well, Great work, and NEVER stop writting.
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm glad you're going to continue this story. I think I like this one for the same reasons I got hooked on to you're other one. You tend to make me like your characters,and care what happens to them. Another way you can hold ones interest,through a multi-chaptered,story is to set up a regular sechedual. Say,you notify readers that you'll post chapters on Mon. Then try like hell to do it. You find that we readers,start looking forward to your work appearing. I usually very pleased when updates show up that way.
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 10:11 CDT
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Well, see what you did. Got me hooked on another of your "original" stories. (normally a shoen-ai/yaoi fan fic reader). Please don't dissapoint continue this it's really good. Soon please.
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Reviewed By: Dark_Angle666 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This definatley has potential! I love the way you have the characters set up. Can't wait for more, so keep up the great work!!
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