| "Do You Love Me Or You Do NOT Love" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
luv ur story so far update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 15:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please keep going PLEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEE KEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPPPPPPP GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGG GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 11:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: dog_gril_102030 On: July 24, 2007 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it its funny and has cliffhangers so plezz wright more so i now what is going to happe and what a boout nuraka
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Reviewed By: dog_gril_102030 On: July 24, 2007 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it its funny and has cliffhangers so plezz wright more so i now what is going to happe and what a boout nuraka
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Reviewed By: miftygirl On: July 08, 2007 04:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an great story so far. I love the senerio. But like another reviewer I find your grammar mistakes distracting from the overall enjoyment of the story. It is apparent that English is not your first language. But you are doing very well for a non-native speaker. In fact, I am will to guess, from the kind of mistakes you are making, that you are Asian. Perhaps you need a beta to help clear up those grammar mistakes. Still, this is quite an effort you are making in writing this story. You should be proud of yourself. I can hardly wait to read the next chapter. Also, please, please finish this story. I can't stand writers who start something and never finish it. :-)
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 03:49 CDT
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great chapter update... enjoyed reading it... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 18:32 CDT
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Okay, I have to be honest here so please don't get offended. You have a really good story idea and I think it can be really intresting but... the dialect and grammer is so off. It's hard trying to follow your sentences sometimes and follow what the characters are saying, if you can get that together then it'll be perfect. I'll keep reading anyway.
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Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 09:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha goodbye kikyo haha.* and now a very evil laugh* *kremt* well wold u plz update soon again? i love this fic so u have to update soon. u are doing a great job
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Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 10:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanx for the update. I hope u will update soon again and would do me a favor and look on my fic: One Hanyou Pirate, One Noble Hanyou. i started to write not too long ago.=)=)=)=)P.S. InuYasha, just dump Kikyo right away. u said it ursself: She smells
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 02:23 CDT
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interesting story... i like it... update soon please
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Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 07:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz, my good maker of fanfics, do not say that InuYasha asked Kikyo. I do not hate her, but I like Inu/kag as a better pairing. ohh what the hell. u decides but tjink of it. Kikyo is a living dead in the show( maybe not here but in the show) and Kagome is a living person. Plz let it be Kag/Inu fic. I beg u * on my hands and knees*
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Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loooooove it. it was inuyasha she saw right? well update soon. i want to hear the rest of the story. i have been reading many prince and princess stories about inu and kags, but most of them weren't finished, so i hope u will write more. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: 1love13 On: May 10, 2007 09:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
write more I want to know who she saw
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