| "His Eyes Are Golden" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2015 22:55 EDT
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That was really good! I can't believe I've never read this before.
Some people have told me that they don't like Sess/Rin but I don't
have a problem with it when it's done well. Kind of bittersweet
that she can't be his one and only, but if she's happy then that's
all that matters. If Inuyasha's dad hadn't sired Sesshoumaru before
he met Izayoi, maybe he would have been forced to do the same
thing?
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Reviewed By: Mamosere On: May 17, 2012 04:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Splendid writing, another rin/sess that i've enjoyed reading like your other one shot that i've read, you really are an amazing writer. Although this is kinda sad and bittersweet i still enjoyed reading it. Loved it. |
Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2008 00:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was good... loved the way it was written...great job!!!
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Reviewed By: Yume_Hikaru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2007 15:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful as always. I am continually amazed at how your characterization is constantly flawless. There is no other way to say it -- Amazing!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 09:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome!! Job well done! Sesshy is so hawt! Rin was surely in heaven! XD I love how he told her to jus call him sesshomaru... i kno it must of been simple, but i still like it =) You're an awesome writer, keep it up.... *grins* Plz check out my fics... *puppy eyes* Pwease... i still have a long way to go, and i cant get the documents open to continue that one shot i have up TT.TT Oh well, tell me what u think nontheless!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 02:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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thats sooooo cute!!! i always thought of Ses/Rin as father and daughter seen that most of all the other storys with them to me werent right beening a couple..... but now im changing my mind for they can be a couple :P but this was REALLY good!!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 12:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*claps* This was incredible, bittersweet, but still incredible. Though Rin/Sess lemons aren't that uncommon, the way you approached this taking into account prejudices and it's consequences, isn't. I think you've really matured as a writer over the time I've been reading your writing especially over the time you wrote Mating Season. There is no true great happy ending, just contentment and really that's what matters here. It was also nice to see you explore other relationships other than Inu/Kags so it's great to see you branch out. The most amazing thing about this oneshot is how you approached Sess, he's still the same cold demon we knew from the series, but at the same time displays tenderness in a way that's uniquely him. And as your forte, wonderful job of emotional build up to the lemon. Unfortunately, I did notice a few very, very minor technical errors (misspelling and such) but I'll leave it up to you whether or not you feel like correcting them since they aren't a real big deal. BTW, I would encourage you to enter this oneshot into that fic contest they're having, worth a shot. -_^;;;
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 07:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a lovely pice. I really enjoyed it. You always write lovely Inuyasha pieces :)
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Title: LOVED IT!!!
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 23:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! I was great! it was beautiful! it was cute! it was lovely! it was, was... well everything! I loved it! I'm glade you took that challenge! Your made a great one-shot! GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Sooo Bitersweet
Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 18:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had to read this twice to catch some of the nuances of Sesshomaru's character, some subtle, some not. Very bittersweet. Writing in the first person is such a challenge, particularly for intimate scenes. You don't get the luxury of that clinical detachment as you do when playing with other characters. BANG UP JOB!
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Title: HAPPY
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 14:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I'm so happy this is great. Thank you for being the first to post. I think I stop breathing you sure do know how to right a perv scene lol. I don't know why you were so worried you did a great job like always and I was happy to see you gone out of Inu&kag fic now I want a yoai from you after Mating Season of course. And who every else is reading this review give a try make a story out of my poem k! talk to ya later!
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Reviewed By: InuHanyouRaeRae [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 14:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This made me so sad.... It's really, really, REALLY good... I'm crying right noe and I'm angry at Sesshomaru. That stupid, stuck-up, pompous ass! I hate youkai women. All the ones in the series are mean. Kagura(I just don't like her, even though she's the good evil girl), Kanna, Kaguya, etc. This is just sooooo good!
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Reviewed By: starblade2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 14:00 EDT
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Wow that was AMAZING! You are one of the VERY few authors that I like that writes lemons well. This was yet another splendid writing by you :)
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