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| "Housewarming" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: ehhhh!!!
Reviewed By: graydevilforever On: December 02, 2008 03:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so hot that it is now one of my favorites. Honestly I was just cruzing the hentai stories for something I had not read before when I stumbled across this. I usually hate oc's with a passion but you made me like her. And I fell in love with your Duo all over again. I desperately hope that you have written more with this type of character description because I felt like I was in the story and was looking over his shoulder. I usually feel a distance from the characters but this was so hot I could feel their sweat. I wish that I could read more in this universe to perhaps them meeting the rest of the pilots. I would really like to see how the up close descriptions would make the scene go. And my all-time favorite line in the story was when Sarah orgasm and Dues eyes were amused. I could squeal right now in pure lust. Oh I love your Duo and I hope that you have written other stories. Oh and as to the rating I voted very high on style, but I must say that there were something's that I thought could be improved If your interested in hearing more just email me at graydevilforever@yahoo.com. Your fan Heather.
| Reviewed By: mannd1068 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 14:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well done!! and excellent story telling. thank you for sharing D
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