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Reviewed By: Dwarfwarrior On: July 25, 2007 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Anyone mind if I review again? No? Ok, good. So got to say, looking very good. I like the way the Shino/Paige relationship is building and good job balancing weak Paige with strong Paige, something I'm sure must be hard to do. I had wondered what was up with the ex boyfriend (most people don't react to bad news quite like he did)and the flashback helped make that a little more clear (Whatever he meant by "other girls" can't be good. Obviously he's not the most stable of fellows) Can't wait to see what comes next (and this review is much longer than I expected, sorry lol)
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Title: I love it
Reviewed By: killingdiva [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 05:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story keep it up it is so much fun to read.I love Paige's....wel spunky-ness or whatever you want to call it just keep it up and keep it real
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Reviewed By: mousetrap [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a cool and different approach. I give you points for originality. Like the idea of using Shino which no one does. I've only read a few chapters but I can't wait to read more. Great work
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Reviewed By: interestingstuff [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 02:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay i liked this new chapter. i like where you're going with the story so far. at first, it was kind of weird, and i thought it was dragging a bit. i actually even tried to stop subscribing to it, but something happened and i still had it in my email. im glad, or else i wouldnt have gotten to see how far along the story has come. i wish you th best of luck, and hope there will be lots of chapters to come. hopefully, this doest sound too corny. i dont write many reviews.
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Title: TheGarra referance
Reviewed By: TheRavenQuoth On: June 29, 2007 08:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
The garra referance was in the part where she was reading about tanuki.
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Reviewed By: sotobell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE! I really love your story i like the religious description. I really like the character shes really a person I could imagine. Please get in some more chaptors!!! -annie
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Reviewed By: TheRavenQuoth On: June 26, 2007 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the only fanfic I've ever read with this theme to it. The style is excelent and the story flows very nicely. Kudos to the romance with shino, its not some thins I often see. I just wanted to say well done. and I eagerly await new updates.
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Title: doing great
Reviewed By: ghostreader14 On: June 25, 2007 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Doing great so far! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Dwarfwarrior On: June 22, 2007 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very very good. I greatly enjoyed it and can't wait until the next update (though don't feel like you have to rush yourself, I can be patient) The totems aspect adds an interesting depth. Good job and I hope to see more of the same in the future. (The spell checker pigs apologize for any errors in this review)
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Reviewed By: killingdiva [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 05:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is en enjoyable story nobody now a days writes about Shino but in my opinion he's hot but not as hot as my Gaara-chan(yes I'm a mass fangirl)anywho keep writing
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Reviewed By: TheForsakenOne On: June 14, 2007 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Just got up to date, i still like this story alot, a bit slow but plenty of charecter deapth, rather a slower than a normal fan-fic than a bad one and this is very good indeed
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Reviewed By: otakutron [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
still the best thing i have read in a long time
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: DragonTamer94 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon I'd like to know what happens next it is very interesting
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Title: brillent
Reviewed By: TheForsakenOne On: May 27, 2007 03:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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i love this fic, an intresting story and you've captured their personality's very well. simply amazing
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: otakutron [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 07:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the most creative naruto fanfiction i have ever read, in fact this is the best fanfiction ever
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