| "Reading Totems" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: KitaTails On: September 21, 2008 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cannot say how much I enjoyed this fanfic, but it was creative and totally different from anything else I've read. I hope to be able to read more of your work.
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Reviewed By: Library Drone On: November 22, 2007 19:15 CST
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Great story. What does Tiblo mean?
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Reviewed By: TheRavenQuoth On: November 19, 2007 14:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't mind the wait. ANd I LOVED the totems made real. Is paige gonna be ok?
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Reviewed By: Alexeihowe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 07:38 CST
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Chapter 30! Yippy! Nice escape, totems, and bloody death. hope to see more soon. Manical LOL
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Reviewed By: Dragonpink2002 On: November 18, 2007 18:02 CST
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I love the way Kagi Taka talks... "yoda on crack"....lol, too funny =^.^=
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Reviewed By: Meep_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good story. I hope you continue writting it and update soon!
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Title: brutal
Reviewed By: Alexeihowe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 07:47 CDT
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hey there me again just caught up again and must say how things have turned in your story are very interesting hopeing to read more in the future and I hope both you and paige have better luck in the future too ps the brutality you have placed in the story has made the little evil part of me to laugh manically and kill things for good example look up my story Forest of Death (one of my first stories so it probably sucks) THANK YOU AND ROCK ON
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Reviewed By: ghostreader14 On: October 20, 2007 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He killed Shino? Paige! Kick his ass for killing Shino!! Great story! I'm really enjoying this! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Alexeihowe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 08:55 CDT
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Hey there. Just finished reading latest batch of the story. Did not expect the hoshi at all. Always thought they were a fan fiction village till resently. Well, can't wait to read next set of chapters.
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Reviewed By: Alexeihowe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read most of your story so far and I have to say I like it alot. Your character buidling is indepth at the same time of being mysterious. And the information you have on Native American religon and culture is impressive. I hope to continue reading more of this story and anything else you might make.
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Reviewed By: jadedkatrina On: September 08, 2007 09:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blinks* my kami-sama... that was... was... steamy, hot, passionate, beautiful and absolutely perfect... that was just... amazing. Now my question is... her body to heal completely... do I sense little shinos to be running around sometime in the future? If so I have an idea for one... lol... anyways I can't wait until the next chapter is released. *huggles* don't work too hard either. jadedkatrina
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Reviewed By: TheForsakenOne On: August 31, 2007 19:44 CDT
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hiya, I finaly have a working computer again, about time. i've been missing this story, its in my top 3. i must admit that when this story started i thought it was good (my top 20)but it just keeps geting better. bit worried that page is going to end up as a spirit hunter ninja (would be cool but im not sure it would fit her). great work, i hope you update soon,(said the guy who read 10ish chaters in one day)
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Title: Hey, its a title!
Reviewed By: Simply, Me :) On: August 10, 2007 05:39 CDT
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Lemons are nice xD
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Reviewed By: TheRavenQuoth On: August 07, 2007 08:43 CDT
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I still think shino and paige are moving to fast in their relationship but I suppose I can understand it. They seem to make a cute cupple. The raven dream was neat.
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Title: I love it
Reviewed By: DemanFox [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a great story updat soon
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