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"In Retrospect" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]
 Title: hummingclover
Reviewed By: Orioni-kun [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 22, 2007 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You put an interesting and beleivable spin on the character that is Risa. She has depth now without being OOC, which is a very pleasent change and I'm sure it's hard to do. Kudos to you for doing research and the writting style is fluid and without loads of gramatical screw-ups. (Oh man, I sound like my English teacher.) I also liked that you didn't just have a haphazard, thoughtless, happy ending. You made it beleivable and melencholy in a way. Yeah, I'm making no sense. All in all, nice job!

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