| "The Wonders Of Technology" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: jebusno2 On: September 20, 2014 10:32 EDT
Comment/Review:
Love the fic are you going to continue it?
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Title: Hot stuff
Reviewed By: zantaz [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2009 21:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fun, sexy, and hot. Nice to see Asuka turning around quickly and Shinji becoming as assertive as he should be. Looking forward to more fun adventures of Shinji and his roommates, maybe with other girls too? Not the first Shinji harem but we could use a lot more.
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Reviewed By: Johnny D On: March 26, 2009 22:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read this back the day you posted it, and I continue to come back and read it when I get in the Evangelion mood, and don't mind a lemon or two to spice up the romance for Shinji and Asuka, Misato or anyone else is a plus, but for me, Asuka ans Shinji are the couple/pair in any story. Please do continue this story, one chapter, two chapters, a whole series, whatever you choose, do continue this story. And please, if you could, leave a message for the rest of your fans on this page so we may know if you are going to continue. Overall, GREAT JOB AND KEEP IT UP.
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Title: The lemon juicer
Reviewed By: zantaz [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2008 11:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story, man! The story development is great, sets up the lemon scenes nicely. Lemon scenes were hot too. Some spelling/grammatical errors exist, but not too much. Just make sure to run a spell checker next time. Looking forward to Shinji making a clean sweep with all the girls (a.k.a. Shinji gets-them-all)...or at least both Misato and Asuka. What further escapades shall Shinji and Asuka get into next? Now that Asuka has turned around and is treating Shinji much better, how do they go on (or get it on) in public? Do continue the story. Keep it up!
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Title: Amazing...
Reviewed By: Shinobi_2.0 On: February 28, 2008 11:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely yes. Continue this story. Your writing style is impeccable and leaves the reader hungry for more.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: EVA-09 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 15:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaa! Now this was pretty original one. Shinji had a spine with those nanites and he fucked Asuka just like that and then Misato. HELL YOU HAVE TO MAKE THE SECOND CHAPTER AND ADD SOME REI GETTING LOVED BY SHINJI AND THEN THEY HAVESOME WILD SEX. PLEASE UPDATE THIS.
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Title: surprising
Reviewed By: Xand Dagger (im a lazy to login member) On: July 18, 2007 16:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic job!! Wether you continue this or not it is absolutely incredible. Words cant describe it as well as i want to. Keep up the great work, I hope to see you future writings or a continuation of this fic. Thx for a gr8 read :)
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Reviewed By: demonevangelion On: July 17, 2007 02:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hell YEA! Continue this fucker, a threesome between Asuka and Misato with shinji is always good, hell add in Rei and youll have any fan cream themselvs lol. As for the rateings I gave this story, the only thing wrong were slight grammer errors but nothig big. cant wait to see your next piece of writting, ill be looking. >;)
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Reviewed By: DarkestShadow22 On: July 10, 2007 12:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
God it good to the 3rd with a spine. I would love to see more of this.
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: FireIvory [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 08:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story, you got to continue this.
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Reviewed By: Milton [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 23:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GENIUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U NEED TO CONTINUE THIS
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Reviewed By: Ultaraguyver [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 09:47 EDT
Comment/Review:
This definatly needs a second chapter
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Reviewed By: zesty fresh On: May 21, 2007 23:47 EDT
Comment/Review:
i say continue
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Reviewed By: A wandering fool On: May 16, 2007 16:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it to death. When is the next chapter comming out?
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Reviewed By: GrayBear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 12:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Next chapter when?
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