| "The Wonders Of Technology" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Title: Amazing...
Reviewed By: Shinobi_2.0 On: February 28, 2008 11:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely yes. Continue this story. Your writing style is impeccable and leaves the reader hungry for more.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: EVA-09 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 15:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaa! Now this was pretty original one. Shinji had a spine with those nanites and he fucked Asuka just like that and then Misato. HELL YOU HAVE TO MAKE THE SECOND CHAPTER AND ADD SOME REI GETTING LOVED BY SHINJI AND THEN THEY HAVESOME WILD SEX. PLEASE UPDATE THIS.
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Title: surprising
Reviewed By: Xand Dagger (im a lazy to login member) On: July 18, 2007 16:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic job!! Wether you continue this or not it is absolutely incredible. Words cant describe it as well as i want to. Keep up the great work, I hope to see you future writings or a continuation of this fic. Thx for a gr8 read :)
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Reviewed By: demonevangelion On: July 17, 2007 02:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hell YEA! Continue this fucker, a threesome between Asuka and Misato with shinji is always good, hell add in Rei and youll have any fan cream themselvs lol. As for the rateings I gave this story, the only thing wrong were slight grammer errors but nothig big. cant wait to see your next piece of writting, ill be looking. >;)
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Reviewed By: DarkestShadow22 On: July 10, 2007 12:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
God it good to the 3rd with a spine. I would love to see more of this.
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: FireIvory [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 08:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story, you got to continue this.
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Reviewed By: Milton [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 23:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GENIUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U NEED TO CONTINUE THIS
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Reviewed By: Ultaraguyver [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 09:47 EDT
Comment/Review:
This definatly needs a second chapter
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Reviewed By: zesty fresh On: May 21, 2007 23:47 EDT
Comment/Review:
i say continue
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Reviewed By: A wandering fool On: May 16, 2007 16:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it to death. When is the next chapter comming out?
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Reviewed By: GrayBear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 12:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Next chapter when?
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Reviewed By: b123 On: May 15, 2007 14:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, so please write more please and next do a threesome with Asuka, Shinji and Misato.
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Reviewed By: 3rd_impact On: May 13, 2007 13:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn good! keep the work up...can't wait until the next one comes out!
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Reviewed By: tack.tician On: May 12, 2007 14:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It just SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good you got to continue this story. Oh and as for the enjoyment factor part of the rating I'd put it on 20 if I could
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Reviewed By: NERVSGC [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 06:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Who comes after Misato? Rei? Maya? Hikari? Can't wait to see. Keep going with this story, I like it. It is a really good story and can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.
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