| "Shocking Revelations" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 19:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
this was good, how does everyone's relationships progress? please write more
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Reviewed By: SilverDrache On: January 28, 2008 20:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I understand your inspiration is running all over the place at this moment, and you have more than enough stories to work with and to add more chapters to, but this would be a wonderful continuation. I can not wait till your have the time and the want to continue this story.
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Title: Mmm, Yummy!
Reviewed By: Pretty in Pink [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm... You're style was a little different in this one. It just felt different. But I guess that's just because it was a naughty piece. Hehe, I'm blushing just reading it. Who would have thought Kagome was so... kinky? But I could see her liking that sort of thing. It always the good girls... -grins-
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Reviewed By: lady silverfox a.k.a. mychelle 79 On: May 31, 2007 15:47 CDT
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wow me like story. kurama is 11 inches DAMN!!! maybe kagome should be mated 2 all 3 of them!! i i mean she fucked all 3 of them please write more please!!!
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 10:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was amazing! im glad you left this open, im curious as to what yusuke will say about hiei's gentleness.
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Reviewed By: Belle111 On: May 11, 2007 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories and I like this one very much. However you have so many unfinished stories. Please continue them before you start something new. I am a fan of INU and YYH crossovers but finish your previous stories too.
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Reviewed By: LadyShadowDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was hot. I always look forward to reading your work. A sequel could be really interesting.
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Title: Ch. 1
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! hehe, that was a great story! i could totally see this going further, but since u have so much 2 do, i say, leave it be, and let it lay where it is! :D its wonderful! i luved i! XD -Mee-chan
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 17:13 CDT
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Awsome little fic there. I look forward to more if and when it comes. As always you are a most excellent writer and I enjoy reading your work. Keep it going as the muse dictates.
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Reviewed By: MarieC On: May 11, 2007 15:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
plz continue
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