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| "Steam" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Title: LMFAO
Reviewed By: Kisei [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 03:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The last part,where you called Roxas a whore was hilarious. xD I busted out laughing at that one. Good Story by the way. And I'm not even that much into Yaoi. xD
| Reviewed By: animegeek22 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 03:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yes, you must be wondering why I keep leaving comments... Well, I'm a depraved soul, too. XD I'm an Axel fangirl, so those burns sparked images in my mind. XP And Roxas is such a whore... God... He's having trouble choosing between Namine, Sora, and Axel. XD Well.... No more comments for tpday. I'm going to sleep now. I really hope you write more Demyx Uke-ness. XD *And Demyx is about as uke as Cloud... Holy crap who'd be seme if they were together?)
| Reviewed By: animegeek22 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD Although I think Axel is solely the property or Roxas (And Larxene is still trying to buy Axel on eBay), That was hot. XD Yummeh. I want Axel with some ice cream now... Too bad he'd melt it... Oh, wow.... Just imagine what Axel and Demyx could do with fire and water? Fire+Water=Steam-eth. XD Science is a blessing sometimes.
| Reviewed By: PromisedWings On: July 24, 2007 23:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
That... was hot. Very, very, VERY hot. Great style too. You really expressed well the feelings of a Nobody and what they go through. Haha and the dash of S&M was okay too. ^_^ Yummy.
| Reviewed By: ScuzzyToast [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmmm, depravity. I've come to love your style and I was definitely not disappointed with this most recent story -- it was intense, sexy, and thoroughly enjoyable. I want to put this story in a bowl, add chocolate, and eat it for dessert. And I mean that in a really good way.
| Title: Mmmmmm . . . .
Reviewed By: Happy Dragon (logged out) On: May 12, 2007 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hellz yeah, you're depravied {please excuse my lack of spelling}, but it's a very tasty kind of depravity. So Yes, this was smexy, and just...wow. The narrative was so distant, that it became super intence, and read a little more like a prose poem then actual prose. Mind you, that's neat trick to pull off, so I'd have to encurage you to continue to cultivate this style...with more p0rNz3rS. XD {Admittedly, you could cultivate it was other things too, but why would you want to?}
| Title: Depraved. D:
Reviewed By: Secretmage [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, very depraved. But we all are to some extent. :3 This was a very lovely kind of depraved fic, darling. I did enjoy it. However, the style of writing kind of threw me for a loop and was slightly weak in some spots. Otherwise, it was well written and very hot. =3 I'd like to see more! ~thumbs up~
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