| "The Baby bet 2" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: KagomeTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe... this is awesome!!! *lightbulb over head* ah!!! inspiration!!! sounds really stupid, but put kags and sas together and nar and sak together like twin affairs, but the other spouse doesn't know anything!!! sry just wanted to "spice" up the story a little
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 12:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
your story is great! can't wait for the next update!!
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Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why ten? Hey I love this stiry so plz update soon okay? even though there isn't many people who are reviewing, many reads so plz update okay? I beg on my knees.
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update. this is going to be a great story i can tell.
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