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| "Goku and Chichi's Royal Lemonade Blues" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Pisces89 On: March 24, 2013 00:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I only read the last chapter, only skimming the whole story, so I have to say that their lovemaking was hot. I wish it was longer though. There really isn't enough Chi/Goku lemon out there. Plenty of Veg/Bul, and even more yaoi but the REAL couple doesn't get any attention. I just love the innocent nature that Goku has, along with the rest of the Son family. I would love to read more if you are debating whether to post, you have my vote on any Son family pairings!! | Reviewed By: butterflyV On: May 15, 2007 19:52 EDT
Comment/Review:
What will the four of them be like come morning, LOL!!! Would they try another mind-session together?
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