| "Get Out of My Video And Into My Life" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: Smoking Hot Fic~!
Reviewed By: Kiila On: January 31, 2008 04:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow is all I can say. I'm really impressed by the originality of this fic. It's so real that I got hooked and couldn't stop reading. I like that Nami is a chat hostess. Hope you will continue more and update soon.
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Reviewed By: Shin_Akamichi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 21:08 EST
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THANKS MAN!ME AND MY GF ARE ECSTACTIC THAT YOU ADDED THESE AFTER WE REQUESTED IN EMAILS^^SHE ACTUALLY WANTS TO INVITE YOU OVER TO "JOIN THE FUN" SOMETIME. Just like he said =3 . and nyaaa...i really liked that kitty one....you keep this up,im gonna be selling swimming pools filled with my wetness....
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 11:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it's about time. I was wondering if you'd ever come back. And where did the Naruto characters come from? I like it but, it was really random in a good way. Question NaruSaku fan or Naruhina. I like the second one the most, anyway I digress, welcome back R80.
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Title: Goodwork
Reviewed By: Wacky [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2007 02:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good work and glad to see the update! I like how you're staying true to the characters and not forcing any personal beliefs about them through the writing (ie, having a character you think is a jerk act that way magnified by a hundred times the way they act in the series). Its a common mistake and even has a name (I forget what). But you've manage to remain true to all characters' intent and reactions. I look forward to seeing Nami's sister and who her new boyfriend really is. (Was there a prelude in chapter 1?) Looking forward to the next post.--Wacky
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Title: Author's Review
Reviewed By: Wacky [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 15:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that the style and creativity used in the work was very well done. While characters are in "real life" compaired to their normal pirate surroundings, they are remaining true to their normal behaviors. Having Nami be a cyberhostess was a brillant plan. She loves money, college would drain it from her, but she has just enough regret to not want to get caught. Good use of characters in various roles. Having Robin be Luffy's aunt was an excellant choice along with her profession. She acts just as how she would in the series only as a college professor. The only thing I believe you got wrong was the whole "spelling" of Zoro/Zolo's name. In the japanese language they have a syllabel that doesn't exist in English. It sounds like an "l" mixed with an "r". Many translators get confused with this and write it as an "r" but pronounce it with an "l". But don't worry about it; I only learned of this recently. Good story overall and I look forward to reading the next installment.
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Reviewed By: HIAH On: June 19, 2007 08:21 EDT
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You really should continue this. Great fic.
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Reviewed By: Vixen777 On: June 07, 2007 03:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this is very very gooood XD I enjoyed myself thoroughly while I read this story. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: inukagluv [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 11:34 EDT
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This is a good story. I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work. Luffy and Nami forever. I am happy too that Funimation owns One Piece. They'll be able to do it right by leaving it alone.
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