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Title: Since 2008?
Reviewed By: Shadow_Knight On: December 04, 2014 10:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Will there be any more?
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Reviewed By: Killthebeast [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2010 12:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best fics i've ever read. Hope that it will be continued. Would love to read more of it.
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Reviewed By: kawaiiwolf On: January 27, 2010 11:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is sooo good. Not just the perverted parts either. The way you work the sex into the story makes it feel natural, unlike some others I've read. I really hope you plan to continue this. I cant wait to see if Luffy and Nami ever get to do it.
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Reviewed By: kawaiiwolf On: August 28, 2009 02:48 EDT
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This is great, not only the writing in general but the more explicit scenes were...hot. And man what a cliffie you left us on, you are an evil bastard. It's driving me crazy trying to figure out who walked in on them. Poor Luffy. Poor Nami. They just cant seem to get all the way, anyway ya gotta update soon.
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Title: hoieee!
Reviewed By: Nami-lover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 19:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tis awesome btw. keep going please! I know it was over a year ago that you did your last chapter, but your story is good and you are an excellent writer! keep up the good work with this story and your others! :)
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Title: dude
Reviewed By: ffcffc On: July 15, 2008 12:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man cant they just get it on already please ps u r the best
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: hihi On: July 15, 2008 12:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude cant what for the costume part
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: iceanfire On: May 11, 2008 20:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is the best please continue and hurry with the next chapter pleasesssssssss
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Title: Your other OP fic => "RULE THE SCHOOL"
Reviewed By: blackbet On: April 12, 2008 14:01 EDT
Comment/Review:
just read that one of yours:"RULE THE SCHOOL". And it is really good. Just wondering if you still go on with that story any time soon or did you stop it completly. Would be nice if you could give a short note, in the next chapter of this fic, if your other story is still "alive" or "dead" (if you keep going on with it or not). till the neyt comment, see ya, ne.
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Title: sweeeet
Reviewed By: suger On: April 05, 2008 22:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude you are the best at this your story is the best i have ever read no joke please be realy fast to post the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Some Girl On: March 29, 2008 02:25 EDT
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This fic is so hot! XD And I love the personalties you gave Bellemere and Nojiko. Update soon~
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 23:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
shishishishi xD no they shall never get a break!! :) still love it, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: blackbet On: March 15, 2008 10:42 EDT
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short, but nice, verrrry nice^^. just don't take "so long" for the next, because of the cliffhanger. It is a good technique, but only when the next chap is coming soon. When its getting longer to wait, I think, most will get a bit frustrated (that's my opinion!!!!). But no need to rush. Take your time!!!! Better a long good chap, then a short, rushed written one.
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Reviewed By: blackbet On: March 13, 2008 19:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH man go on PLEASE!!!!!!This fic is truly amazing and even so the wrighting. On your AN. you said: "...and I have worked out over a certain period of time so as I don't leave you the readers with your heads spinning. Chapter five will be up eventually,.." would be good if you would do it in the nearer future. I don't want to rush you, but my head is allready spinning, so please atleast try to. Thiy story is to goooooooood!!!!!
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: ingy On: March 09, 2008 10:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please i am begging you pilease write the next chapter fast
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