| "Get Out of My Video And Into My Life" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
| Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] |
Title: Your other OP fic => "RULE THE SCHOOL"
Reviewed By: blackbet On: April 12, 2008 14:01 EDT
Comment/Review:
just read that one of yours:"RULE THE SCHOOL". And it is really good. Just wondering if you still go on with that story any time soon or did you stop it completly. Would be nice if you could give a short note, in the next chapter of this fic, if your other story is still "alive" or "dead" (if you keep going on with it or not). till the neyt comment, see ya, ne.
|
Title: sweeeet
Reviewed By: suger On: April 05, 2008 22:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude you are the best at this your story is the best i have ever read no joke please be realy fast to post the next chapter
|
Reviewed By: Some Girl On: March 29, 2008 02:25 EDT
Comment/Review:
This fic is so hot! XD And I love the personalties you gave Bellemere and Nojiko. Update soon~
|
Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 23:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
shishishishi xD no they shall never get a break!! :) still love it, ja ne!
|
Reviewed By: blackbet On: March 15, 2008 10:42 EDT
Comment/Review:
short, but nice, verrrry nice^^. just don't take "so long" for the next, because of the cliffhanger. It is a good technique, but only when the next chap is coming soon. When its getting longer to wait, I think, most will get a bit frustrated (that's my opinion!!!!). But no need to rush. Take your time!!!! Better a long good chap, then a short, rushed written one.
|
Reviewed By: blackbet On: March 13, 2008 19:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH man go on PLEASE!!!!!!This fic is truly amazing and even so the wrighting. On your AN. you said: "...and I have worked out over a certain period of time so as I don't leave you the readers with your heads spinning. Chapter five will be up eventually,.." would be good if you would do it in the nearer future. I don't want to rush you, but my head is allready spinning, so please atleast try to. Thiy story is to goooooooood!!!!!
|
Title: sweet
Reviewed By: ingy On: March 09, 2008 10:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please i am begging you pilease write the next chapter fast
|
Title: Smoking Hot Fic~!
Reviewed By: Kiila On: January 31, 2008 04:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow is all I can say. I'm really impressed by the originality of this fic. It's so real that I got hooked and couldn't stop reading. I like that Nami is a chat hostess. Hope you will continue more and update soon.
|
Reviewed By: Shin_Akamichi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 21:08 EST
Comment/Review:
THANKS MAN!ME AND MY GF ARE ECSTACTIC THAT YOU ADDED THESE AFTER WE REQUESTED IN EMAILS^^SHE ACTUALLY WANTS TO INVITE YOU OVER TO "JOIN THE FUN" SOMETIME. Just like he said =3 . and nyaaa...i really liked that kitty one....you keep this up,im gonna be selling swimming pools filled with my wetness....
|
Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 11:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it's about time. I was wondering if you'd ever come back. And where did the Naruto characters come from? I like it but, it was really random in a good way. Question NaruSaku fan or Naruhina. I like the second one the most, anyway I digress, welcome back R80.
|
Title: Goodwork
Reviewed By: Wacky [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2007 02:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good work and glad to see the update! I like how you're staying true to the characters and not forcing any personal beliefs about them through the writing (ie, having a character you think is a jerk act that way magnified by a hundred times the way they act in the series). Its a common mistake and even has a name (I forget what). But you've manage to remain true to all characters' intent and reactions. I look forward to seeing Nami's sister and who her new boyfriend really is. (Was there a prelude in chapter 1?) Looking forward to the next post.--Wacky
|
Title: Author's Review
Reviewed By: Wacky [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 15:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that the style and creativity used in the work was very well done. While characters are in "real life" compaired to their normal pirate surroundings, they are remaining true to their normal behaviors. Having Nami be a cyberhostess was a brillant plan. She loves money, college would drain it from her, but she has just enough regret to not want to get caught. Good use of characters in various roles. Having Robin be Luffy's aunt was an excellant choice along with her profession. She acts just as how she would in the series only as a college professor. The only thing I believe you got wrong was the whole "spelling" of Zoro/Zolo's name. In the japanese language they have a syllabel that doesn't exist in English. It sounds like an "l" mixed with an "r". Many translators get confused with this and write it as an "r" but pronounce it with an "l". But don't worry about it; I only learned of this recently. Good story overall and I look forward to reading the next installment.
|
Reviewed By: HIAH On: June 19, 2007 08:21 EDT
Comment/Review:
You really should continue this. Great fic.
|
Reviewed By: Vixen777 On: June 07, 2007 03:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this is very very gooood XD I enjoyed myself thoroughly while I read this story. Update soon!
|
Reviewed By: inukagluv [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 11:34 EDT
Comment/Review:
This is a good story. I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work. Luffy and Nami forever. I am happy too that Funimation owns One Piece. They'll be able to do it right by leaving it alone.
|
| Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] |
