| "in her skirt" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Chapters
Reviewed By: AntiNaruxHinaXP [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 01:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more chapters! I REALYY want to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Inuchick101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 21:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
You skipped A LOT of time between chapter 7 and 8. What happened between? When did Hinata start marrying anyone? When did she meet Naruto? When did Neji choose someone? I'M CONFUSED!!!!!!!!!!!! sorry if it sounded like a flame...
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Reviewed By: Inuchick101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, i can't see Gaara in the slut category... Well it's still a good story though! I like it! But please try to fix the grammar and spelling. Just re-read it before you post please. I have spelling mistakes here and there too but no offense but you have a LOT and it makes it kind of hard to read. But the whole plot and everything is really good! Keep it up!! =]
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think i ah cool fanfic caint wait till u write more its real cool soooooo dont keep me waiting..........:)
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good noW!!! perfect 2 read !!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 16:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
You should have Naruto like her and have him find out what Sasuke and Gaara are doing and have Naruto KILL them both mainly Sasuke the loser
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOood fic.. but can u make the chapters written neater not all bundled up because it was pretty hard to read... but grat plot
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