| "Brothers-in-Arms" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: PhantasumFantasy On: March 19, 2010 14:25 CDT
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I enjoyed reading this fic. Plz continue! Im looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: utsuro-san On: February 15, 2010 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE hurry with update, been waiting for 2 months now xx
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Title: The last time I reviewed O.o
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: November 12, 2008 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! The last time I reviewed was in 2007. Yikes! Now I feel like a bad reader *wince*. Very sorry about that, got caught up in everyday life I guess. ^^' I happend to stumble on this again and thought I'd review since you haden't updated in a while. (I had been keeping up with the story and forgetting to review for which im very, very sorry) Usually im not that bad about reviewing, im so very ashamed of myself please do update though and I promise to AT LEAST make time to say thank you ^^' Happy thanksgiving and merry christmas if you don't update before then, though im sure myself and others hope you do. until then, ja!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 13:58 CDT
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That was a good chapter. Both of the brothers learned something and they are becoming more comfortable. It's a good thing that they can adjust so quickly. They'll need that trait. Heheh, Inu got to check out Sess. I'm not sure I understand the view of the stripes. It's nice that Inuyasha is willing to put everything into preparing for his arrival at court. That will be nerve wracking. I like how you ended the chapter. They were actually sitting side by side and touching. The little elbow in the ribs was cute. I hope that Inuyasha comes up with some touches that make them appear closer and doesn't break the youkai behavior. I look forward to see what you do with them next. ^_^
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Reviewed By: POlka Dot On: May 05, 2008 20:19 CDT
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But there was no touching. sob . I wanna little inuTLC At least this fic isn't dead.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2008 17:53 CDT
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'Touch', huh? That sounds interesting. Can't wait to see what all of this is about. You're really trying to build the suspense here. Maybe I should flick your ear. LOL I don't know if I reviewed the last chapter. Inuyasha flicking Sesshoumaru's ear was really funny. Sesshoumaru's reaction was very shocking. However, it does give insight into Sesshoumaru's determination to see things through. I do believe that Sesshoumaru might also learn a few things while he is training Inuyasha. The whole thing about Rin was very sad. I would have hoped that she would live to a ripe old age. But it was so much worse in that he would have taken her as his lady. So sad. Well, I can't wait for the next training phase! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Amanda Saitou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2008 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, it's great to see a new chap so soon! It was a short one,but it was interesting to have an insight on Inuyasha's view about this new interaction with his brother. And of course, I'm also curious to know what Sesshie means by touching... please update soon, I really love your story!!
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Reviewed By: Polka Dot On: February 07, 2008 22:20 CST
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Good for Inu he put Sesshy in his place.
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Title: chapter 6
Reviewed By: velvetarms77 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 19:55 CST
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I'm really enjoying the dynamic you have going between the brothers, and it's fun to watch them both squirm under their own discomforts and insecurities. The way that Inuyasha knocked Sesshoumaru off his high horse and having Sesshoumaru grudgingly accept his rebuke.. well, that was grand. I'm shivering in anticipation of Inu having to get used to Sess's touch! :P
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is very fascinating, amusing and well written. I hope you choose to continue. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Amanda Saitou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 11:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic, hope you keep on updating, that's the kind of InuSess I love to read!
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Reviewed By: dyehigh13 On: September 08, 2007 15:50 CDT
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Ooh, pretty. Plot, and character development, and a nice slow delicious buildup. I am looking forward to more of this. ^^
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: August 14, 2007 20:43 CDT
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aww they're making nice. Not nice nice, just nice.
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 14:21 CDT
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Well it seems to getting to know you part is goin' to be happen'n
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Reviewed By: polka dot On: July 05, 2007 20:53 CDT
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regret he shall, for that path leads to the dark side. I hope Jaken will be in the fic, he's my fave.
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