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| "Hating to love him" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: inuluver4everhotmailcom [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2009 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i dont know if anyone has answered ur question yet or not but the weapon that sango uses is called Hiratsu. as for the character names i dont see any mistakes in that so far. that said great story so far!
| Reviewed By: whimsy007 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 21:33 CST
Comment/Review:
So OOC that I wouldn't know where to begin, but not least of which is that she is betraying InuYasha, Miroku, Sango and even Kouga all of whom both desire and are required by honor to kill Naraku. Naraku isn't a "bad boy". He is a sociopath who killed Kikyou, destroyed InuYasha's hopes, killed Miroku's father and grandfather, Sango's clan, and many wolf demons. But suddenly, he experiences love. Impossible to drop suspension of disbelief. Also, this story should be classified as "divergence" and not "continuation".
| Reviewed By: oldestmaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 03:56 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel sorry for all 3 of them. If Kagome lets Naraku make love to her again she is going to start feeling like a slut...she wasn't raised to give herself so freely so often to two different guys. At her age she should be able to enjoy a one on one relationship with a guy and not be torn between the two. I hope she decides before it isn[t her decision any more.
| Reviewed By: matmat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
kagome is too easy. After 3 days.... c'mon. She lives in a fantasy world, and as naraku says, has a childish like image of wat love should be and is infatuated with it. But she's also very emotional and confused about who she wants. Even though it was a nice twist to have her like naraku, its sorta mean how she's treating inyuasha. I mean, she's doing to inyuasha wat naraku is doing to her, which is denying his love. But, this is good for an irony, as kagome is going to get back with inyuasha, just like how naraku got back with her. I dont no if i'm reading too much into this whole thing but thats wat i see. Oh, also, i like even though it looks wrong, that kagome is 'dealing' with naraku. It shows that kagome isn't afraid to no wat love is and it shows that she doesnt have a preference with good or evil, only that she cares about love. its like she sees the good in people even if they are bad or evil to every 1 else. i also get that it supporsts, never judge a book by its cover... i might be going too in depth but... thats wat is there to me. Anyway, back to the matter.... inyuasha is a foolish romantic... i mean, kagome just dissed him by saying, after he confessed his love for her, that she loved naraku, and on top of that, left with naraku and ignored inyuasha... he should have walked away to me... but people do stupid things wen they're in love...but naraku is the boss. He can control his emotions and no's wat and wen to say stuff... but which is better, a life with naraku whom treats her like a 'lady' or inyuasha, who always gets in arguments with kagome, but excites her in doin so and 'pulls them together'... hmmmmm.... i'm pulling toward inyuasha. Any way this was my first review so... until i read again.
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