| "An Unexpected Love" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 23:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice chapter you can realy see the affection Sesshoumaru is showing for Kagome and its nice to see some one cares for her....plz update soon .......Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Reddeuphoria On: October 22, 2007 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do have to this is one of the most interesting fictions I have read. The story line is amazing.
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Reviewed By: Chaya_09 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, I really wish Kagome will choose Sess, but I suppose it is hard to give up feelings for someone else.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha lov3r [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 19:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting very interesting. Its very original. I never wouold have thought to make it so they aren't in love in the beginging. All the stories I've read so far have it so they are in love from the beginging when they mate. Its a nice change. It just seems more like Sesshomaru for him to not be in love from the begining. Just possessive. Anyway keep up the good work. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17 (not signed in) On: September 26, 2007 09:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I like what you've written so far!! Please update soon :]
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Reviewed By: Chaya_09 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARE YOU SERIOUS!!! Naraku was able to waltz into the castle unnoticed? Even with a little help it should have been harder than that. But it was a good chapter. Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Serenity666 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 16:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I enjoyed reading this story. Please continue to update. I am anxiously waiting for the next chapters arrival. Thank you much!
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Reviewed By: Fluffysgirl4ever(nli) On: July 24, 2007 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I absolutely love it... I mean it's just sooo good... your writing style and just altogether plot definetly makes this story different from the others... keep it going, I'm looking foreward to an update, soon lol
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Title: Chapters 1 - 5
Reviewed By: KamakuraYumi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a little darker than I expected but I like a challenge. I get tired of the usual Sessh/Kag jaunts. You're a wonderful writer. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story but my bed is calling me and I won't be able to give it the careful consideration it deserves. Promise to keep me guessing? I can never predict what direction you'll take next.
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Reviewed By: Chaya_09 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story! update soon!
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Reviewed By: oldestmaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 09:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It always amazes when a writer can influence his characters in ways unexpected by the reader and stillhave them as the reader expects them to be. Like finding facets of friends and loved ones that you didn't expect but still have them be the same friends and loved ones you had always known. How much longer can Sess abide InuYasha watching their moments together...to be able to only concentrate on Kagome and their growing feelings for each other...
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Reviewed By: Persephone (Age:87) On: May 18, 2007 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, i think this is the beginning of a truly beautiful story. I will watch and see how you make this story grow and progress. I have high hopes for you young one. With practice you will have a great future.
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