| "Tempest's Dawn" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... really like it so far... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Bds13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really good. i got mad once it was over. cant wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: lovelyflip08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 22:02 CDT
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yeah...i didn't know if i reviewed this story yet...apparently not! anways...it looks like its going to be a very good story...so keep up the great work and please update soon!
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Title: pointed look at you*
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You, young lady/man (sorry, i dont know ^^) need to write! Why? because, i said so, and what I says goes. jk. dont want you going to fast! GREAT JOB!! KEEP IT UP!! ^^
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 06:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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awww im sorry about the 2 rewviews lol anyways i love it!! ^^ so please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 06:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWW I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! Inuyasha's name and number... how would i love to have that.... (is he was real of course) awwwww *jumps around* PLEASE update soon!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 06:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWW I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! Inuyasha's name and number... how would i love to have that.... (is he was real of course) awwwww *jumps around* PLEASE update soon!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Rider [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 20:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Are there demons in this story and GREAT WORK!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kicnlus_inuforeva [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh, I LOVE IT! I really do. Amazing! (haha its been awhile on mediaminer - in case you've forgotten, this is Katie! ^-^) But seriously, it's amazing. I'd sorta forgotten how much I love your writing! I thought I'd point out a couple of typos though, if you want to fix them. In the part when kagome's coming down the stairs, and you start describing what sango's wearing, I think you put Kagome instead of Sango so it's like you were describing two different outfits, but with both of them for kagome. Oh, and before I forget - I LOVE THAT SONG! The 30 Seconds to Mars one. When it mentions Sango's father speaking japanese, I think you left out a word? And only one more. Is there supposed to be an "It" when it's talking about inuyasha swinging the mic stand around? But again, the story is so well written! I just love your style. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: inufanfan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 20:33 CDT
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why hello, i just wanted to say that even though you have anly written one chapter i am in love with your story! please comtinue it soon cause i cant wait!!!!! great job!!! (poor inuyasha, kikyo that bitch =)!!!!!)
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