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| "Show and Tell" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: hazard2self On: December 20, 2007 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, now I understand why this one didn't go on fanfiction.net! Nice flow, the inserted song had good timing(even though it was a very scary song!) But where in the world is this crazy party? What's big enough to house all the jounin and chunin and has carpet on the walls?
| Reviewed By: gilith ramaloce [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 02:23 CDT
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-sighs- Oh I was so happy to see that you've continued the series!!! I look forward to more chapters. And was AtW something you wrote, and if so where can I find it?
| Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: June 11, 2007 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*fans self* Steamy! I love the song Closer. Savage Garden and Nine Inch Nails fit my moods back then when I went through an angsty phase a few years back. So I became too familiar with their song lyrics. I have to say they might fit Kakashi to a 'T' in Kakashi Gaiden, and now, that is, since he went back to Anbu...*muses* I know he is a lazy pervert, but i was just reminded that he's also dangerous...
| Reviewed By: RazZadig [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 20:33 CDT
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Wonderful. Okay, so call me twisted, but my overwhelming thought at the end of the chapter was, "This is so sweet!" Love the details and the hotness. Must have happened quick since it was one song unless they had it on loop. I usually go find the songs you put in your stories so I can plan them for mood. Not usually a fan of songfics but I like these songs. Keep writing!
| Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm... I liked it ^^ You're a great author, but I must say it was a rather strange contrast to I.Intolorence. This fic was almost a little bit too kinky, since the previous fic was so sweet, ya know? But other than that I think it was great, and you should write more lemon-fics. :D Great job!
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