| "Waking the Dead" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Karina Garcia On: March 04, 2010 16:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great... i was so into it i didnt notice that it was discontinued... PLEASE continue it... its really good and it was just about to reach the good part.
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Title: Whoa!
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 22:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for more!
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Title: OMG!!!!
Reviewed By: kandyapple08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 15:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ThIs is the best story ever!!!!! awsome i love it plz write more!!!
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Title: snowecat (not signed in)
Reviewed By: snowecat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2007 20:01 CDT
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It's cool that you've continued this story. The death scene was a tear-jerker. Hope you update soon. Wonder what the Snake wants in the lair.
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Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 23:33 CDT
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Oh my what a death scene. You played that scene so well, Naruto giving himself up for Sasuke. Now they are closer to the spot this all happened. Are you going to go along with the manga on where Orochimaru is or do something from your own imagination? What happened to the part of Orochimaru that was in Sasuke? You put in the chapter that Sasuke killed Orochimaru twice . . . are you counting the first time and when he forced him away when Naruto died as the two times or have they faced someone with part of Orochimaru's soul before? Loved how you had Kakashi teasing Sasuke, very in character for him I think. Thank you so much for not giving up on this story and posting another chapter. Can't wait to see what you have in store for this story next. Please keep up the good work and take care.
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Reviewed By: chezaswolf666 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found myself on the verge of crying! Its very emotionally touching.I love the Sasuke and Sakura relationship ^_~. I hope u continue it! please! I want to know whats up with Akatsuki and Orochimaru.Oh, and I never rate Originality/Creativity, since its all based off of someone else's work, its seems pointless to me, so don't take it as a bad rating.PLEASE CONTINUE!
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Title: Liked your story
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 15:38 CDT
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It is involving there are some person mistakes here and there but is quite fitting with a Kakashi Gaiden tone. It is a shame that if you do not publish romance, hentai etc people do not care to review. Please keep it going I am wondering what is next
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Reviewed By: snowecat32 On: June 13, 2007 13:46 CDT
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Wow, this is really good. What will they find in the hideout I wonder. Please keep going, you're off to a great start.
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Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 21:28 CDT
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Another wonderful chapter, thank you for the update to your story. The development of Sasuke and Sakura's friendship was a nice addition, it seems Sasuke has been able to at least find some type of relationship he can have with Sakura since he lost Naruto. It is so sad though . . . . I still can't wait to see what you have in mind for this story. It is very well written, you are doing a great job with this story. Sorry to see you haven't recieved many reviews here. Sigh, seems to be the way here anymore. Hope you don't loose heart at the lack of them. I'm really am enjoying your story. Looking forward to more from you on this, take care.
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Reviewed By: snowecat (not signed in) On: May 21, 2007 23:59 CDT
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Oh, you have GOT to keep going with this. This is really well-done. I don't know what pairings if any you will have, but be different. Be really wild and give Sakura BOTH her lovelies.
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Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 19:11 CDT
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Just found your story, very interesting. I liked how you presented the characters and their interaction with each other, seemed very believeable. Hope you will stay with this, I'd love to see what you have in mind for this story. PLease stay with it, keep up the good work. Take care.
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