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| "The Inevitable" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Twitch-6 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 13:37 CST
Comment/Review:
its been nearly a year now and there has been nothing new to this story. its caught my interest but i'm concerned that there will be nothing more. do you plan to continue this story or is that all?
| Reviewed By: Daimian Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm.... ok, so I'll admit, I'm still a newbie around here, but I have been a writer for a long time and a reader of Naruto Fanfics so I know what I am doing. Now, on to the ratings of mine. Style of writing, average. No offense or anything, but your writing style is what you find on a so-so fanfic. Knowing that, you have room to improve. Spelling and Grammar, average. Why?... well, I really don't notice small mistakes and usually just let it slide. Big ones though... gives me a headache. Originality.... well... Let's be frank, merging with Kyuubi is something that many people already used. Also the whole Kabuto convincing Naruto goes to sound... well, if Kabuto doesn't bring Naruto to Orochimaru then that boosts everything up one point, but I'll presume that you ARE thinking of the old 'Naruto goes to Sound cause of a promise of a better life' plot. Enjoyment Factor? Average. It is a fanfic that you would read if you are looking to pass time or just bored. No offense, just being honest here. Overall? A good start. We'll see how it goes. Seeing that I'm still a newbie at mediaminer, I still need to figure out some stuff, but hey, I could still review. Godspeed -Daimian, Out-
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Reviewed By: confusednarutofan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm liking the story so far. I'm a big fan of Naruto stories where he leaves the village because they don't appretiate him. There's not enough of those. Besides for minor spelling and grammar errors, this looks like it's going to be a real good story.
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