| "Move Over Oil of Olay" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 19:45 CDT
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Aw, that was sweet, just as you intended. I loved that he was worked up over Kagome having a bitchfest. Those two are a real hoot. I can see it happening. ^_^ Snow
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Title: Okay this is going to bother me....
Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 00:01 CST
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What is a "lollop"? o_o I've been trying to figure it out, play it cool, pretend I know what it means and vaguely try to attach its meaning to something I kind of know like a trot or a gallop. . . But I cant...O_O WHAT IS A LOLLOPING? WUARRGGG
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Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 01:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Somehow you make "silly typical male"/"weird sex noises" sound sexy. And my new favorite quote "Shit, her sneezing makes me horny." If you're going to hell for creating this hilariosity, then us readers are going to hell for enjoying it immensely.
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is not smut..just nature taken to another level. his brother must be so envious
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Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 13:14 CDT
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I have just read all three parts of this little trilogy and I was highly entertained. I thought the first two were witty and full of spunk and this third installment was cute and sweet and playful and fabulous. Great job! ^_^
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent! I thoroughly enjoyed every part of the story. Please do more... Bravo, Encore!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just found this, and its awesome! ;)
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Reviewed By: Ariel Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 22:07 CDT
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bravo...i like your creativity very much...its unique...please write more wonderful but dirty stories *snicker*
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is turning out to be quite the series, indeed. I love the little bit at the beginning with Sesshoumaru. I can totally see him getting his entertainment from watching Inuyasha's children torment him instead of doing the dirty work himself. I also agree with what Sassa said, it shows that you CAN continue to have an entertaining sex life after so many years of marriage - or being mated- whatever. You just need to get a little more creative from time to time, is all. Very well written.
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 13:27 CDT
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Bloody Brillant!! as Ronald Weasely would say!! Nikkie rolls lazily over in her messed up bed, sheets a completely disarray... lazily reaches over to pull out a box and take out the item inside and putting it slowly to her mouth.. licks lips.. Very sexily opens eyes.. I Congratulate you, that was Excellent.. and proceeds to suck on her Chocolate Pocky.. I loved it! So very Very Steamy hot!! and Boy do I ever love my Honey even more!! I will seriously be Super enjoying my hot cups o'green tea.. Just wish me luck I don't climax while out in public or worse at work... Snickers!! *eyes sparkly* I love this series! And I do agree once they have admitted their feelings and had the first pup together.. It would take more for them to blush but they would be "In Heat" with each other very much all the time. Kudos!! *gasp* we don't really need to know where his birthmark is, do we??
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 11:27 CDT
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Hot, sweet and just a tad sticky... who wouldn't want it like that?? And about being serious... I mean, there's many aspects of life, as there is of truth. Here you clearly display that Inuyasha and Kagome are responsible parents that makes sure their children get good exercise and learns to take care of themselves, plus teaches them that many years of marriage (or whatever) does not mean you grow tired of your partner sexually. All you need to do is to be a bit of a freak, that's all. Not serious? Pah, I beg the differ! *rolls over laughing* But it WAS sweet... very sweet. There's another one for my boyfriend to read, just so he knows where I get my ideas from... : )
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