| "Love and Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 17:31 CDT
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Your paragraphs are very muddled together. I suggest spacing them out with at least one space. Also, you should spell check. I see a lot of uncapitalized letters and incorrectly capitalized letters as well. Go over your chapters and re-read each one at least 3 times for mistakes. Everytime I write a chapter I make sure to do that because after you write it and then read it you find the mistakes you made much easier. :) Ciao
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Reviewed By: InuAndKag4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 21:46 CDT
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inuyasha and kikyo LIVE together....but are NOT married yet...only engaged
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 22:16 CDT
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I like your story so far. Curious though, did Inuyasha marry Kikyo or are they living together and she is still his fiance?
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 23:48 CDT
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interesting story... like it so far... i just hope Kagome won't be so gullible with Inuyasha around... hope she'll play it smart... anyway update soon... please and thank you!
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Title: hey i need help
Reviewed By: InuAndKag4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 21:47 CDT
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ok well not only am i bussy...i need a few ideas for my story...i would like to have a few ideas that i might use...beacuse i know a few things...but...well i need more before continuing...thanks...bye
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Title: Omg!!!
Reviewed By: InuAndKag4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 14:50 CDT
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i am soooooooo sorry....i'll try to put a new chapter as soon as i get free time!!!
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Reviewed By: @___@ On: May 26, 2007 06:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story! But I think your last update was a bit too short for me T.T I wanna know what happens next so please update soon ;D
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Reviewed By: InuAndKag4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 05:55 CDT
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sorry the chapter ( family ) was so short, i was just bussy but i promised to right alot so i did!
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Title: Lovelyflip08
Reviewed By: InuAndKag4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 05:49 CDT
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thank you for telling me you liked it...and it will!
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Reviewed By: lovelyflip08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 02:05 CDT
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how sad!! i really hope that this story gets happier!
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Reviewed By: lovelyflip08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 19:13 CDT
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omfg!! the beginning of this story was sooo sad! like im not even kidding!! anyways...the story is getting happier!! so great work and can't wait to see what happens next
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Title: ME AGAIN!
Reviewed By: InuAndKag4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 19:43 CDT
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Im only doing this for the story! i REALLY don't know why this is happening! sorry!
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Reviewed By: InuAndKag4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 19:22 CDT
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THIS IS NOTHING...IM ONLY PUTTING THIS REVIEW CAUSE MY STORY DISAPPERS WITHOUT IT!!!!!
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