| "What I've Done" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: XD
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 01:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
I seriously was inches away from cring my eyes out I had the hole in my heart and it hurt....glad it all worked out....hehe....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Alaskan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I'm really impressed with this story - I'm one of the people who loves angsty stuff, and thisd was the one of the best I've ever read! The lemon was excellent too, I wouldn;t have guesed it was your first. Keep up the good work! (pssst, a sequel would be fun..:P)
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 23:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hoo-boy....that was HOT! Very nice emotion, excellent pacing all the way through. Characterization beautifully done, your writing is truly lovely. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done. I could always see Kagome letting Inu go if his heart was with Kikyou. Nice job with this oneshot...I really liked it.
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 21:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was angsty and emotional, but i liked it. And the lemon was pretty good. :) Keep up the good work and i look forward to reading anything else you write. *gravity of love* hint hint.. lol :)
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EXCELLENT one-shot. Emotional and HOT! The romance was just as good as the hot sex. You can't ask for better!
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Reviewed By: nekokyttin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! That was HOT! You need another lemon up at least in gravity of love...great story!
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