|
| "Black Moon (Revised)" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: I Don't Know Too Much About Sailor Moon But...
Reviewed By: sephlier(fuess I'm only logged in at the forum...) On: May 16, 2004 09:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just a brief review...I am still working on the review at the forum. I like this story. I'm not used to the Japanese names of the others but I am familiar with Rei, Ami, Michiru, and Huruka (oooh...Uranus) I have just come to the conclusion that it's not Serena it's Usagi. I am a little confused but I won't be once I get the dvd set. I have come to know Sailor Moon by what used to be shown on the Fox Kids nextwork from so many years back and what was shown on Cartoon Network. I thought that Black Lady/Wicked Lady was the daughter of Sailor Moon/Princess Serenity. I'm sorry as I said I really don't know the rest of the original storyline...silly dubs... I noticed some misplaced words in a few of your sentances (I have notes). One thing that kind of affected me was the use of the Japanese language. I try to stay away from using it in my stories. I know that the story is set in Japan but you also need to know that there might be people like me that are learning it or have not learned it yet that are reading because they know about Sailor Moon. I feel that when you can't think of another word best fitting for a sentance than by all means use a Japanese word...I did it with a Vietnamese word... I hope you decide to continue this. Not everyone is dead. What happened to Damian (Mama? see still learning can't get off of dubbs)? Is Dark Usagi under someone elses control?
| Reviewed By: Artema [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2002 00:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow.
I am in utter awe. Violent, disparaging, emotional, *Gorgeous* springs to mind.
Disturbing too, but morbidity in and of itself is somewhat sensual...
Great work. |
|
|
